This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
The Sum of the Parts
By
God, I love this part! As he intends, until I am released, the corner is the whole of my world. I never hear him approach. No matter how hard I try not to, I always flinch. It always starts the same way, with his strong left hand touching my cheek, and gently wiping away the streaking tears. His fingers trace the line of my jaw, then sweep across my mouth. I forgive them, and give them a soft kiss.
This part is wonderful! His right hand combs through my hair. Then he gathers my hair into a tight pony tail. With a firm but gentle tug, he uses the pony tail to steer my head around for a kiss. His left hand drops to cup my breast.
This part is awesome! His right hand releases my hair. With the barest contact using the very tips of his fingers, his hand floats down to the small of my back My nipples swell as his index finger grazes the top of the cleft. I hold my breath as he explores each rubescent weal. When he finishes mapping the Martian terrain, his finger teases my anus. I push back against his finger. The dew glistens on my pussy as he....
"Katrina! I told you to ask for the first!"
God, I hate this part!
The End
© Copyright May 9, 2001
Reviews
Alex Birch <alexbirch(at)blueyonder(dot)co(dot)uk>
A nicely described little cameo of the writers love of a spanking sequel which appears to distract her from the punishment to come. It's nicely written with warmth and feeling but I felt that a lot more could have been made of the allowable format and at less than 250 words this is a very economical piece indeed.
Simon <srb(at)imrryr(dot)demon(dot)co(dot)uk>
A very sensual and evocative piece of writing. It flows well and draws the reader into a very vivid picture. The last lines give a nice image of someone torn by the different aspects of their submissiveness.