This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
Short & Smack
By
Smack, Smack, Smack, Smack
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Smack, Smack, Smack, Smack
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"There, don't you feel better now?" He asked.
"No!" She answered truthfully.
"You just can't seem to get enough of this, can you?" He challanged her.
"No!" She admitted honestly.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2001
Reviews
RCG <rcg1574(at)yahoo(dot)com>
It's short, to the point, and has the right idea. A little more development couldn't have hurt though.
Wailer <wailer(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Short <pause> and sweet <pause>... left the reader hanging on to find out what would happen <pause> next, which is a sign of a good short story.