One More Cup of Coffee (Valley Below)

This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments

Category: Adult
Parody of One More Cup of Coffee by Bob Dylan

Louiza <louiza@home.com>

Your breath is sweet
Your eyes are like two jewels in the sky
Your ass is red, the cheeks are bruised
on the pillow where it lies
But he doesn't sense resentment
Just gratitude and love
Your loyalty belongs to him
and to the stars above

One more cup of coffee 'fore he goes,
One more cup of coffee 'fore he goes
To the valley below

Your Daddy, he's a Master
and a spankerman by trade
He taught you how to raise your ass
and how to take the cane
He oversees his kingdom
so no stranger does intrude
Your body, it trembles as he calls out
for another plate of food

One more cup of coffee for the road,
One more cup of coffee 'fore he goes
To the valley below.

Your sister sees the future
like your mama and yourself
You've never learned to read or write
There's no books upon your shelf
And your pleasure knows no limits
Your ass it bears his marks
But your heart is like an ocean
Mysterious and dark.

One more cup of coffee for the road,
One more cup of coffee 'fore he goes
To the valley below.

The End

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Reviews

Naomi Darvell <naomi_darvell(at)hotmail(dot)com>
Louiza picks the best songs to paroday! Here, she hasn't changed all that many words, but she's used her special meaning of "Daddy" to turn the lyrics inside out. Very clever!

Frank <sswitcher(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Wow, this was brilliant! The subtle changes are a perfect fit; this is one of the few song parodies I've seen that actually are an improvement on the original. A tender and touching tribute from a young lady who is obviously very devoted to her Daddy.

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