This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
Lines Crossed and Lines Drawn
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I must not play with my little peeper!
I must not play with my little peeper!
I must not play with my little peeper!
Shit! My hand's cramping already!
"How's my little one comin'?"
"Only 75, Daddy, and my hand hur--"
"Well, I guess you better tow the line then -- 125 to go."
Sigh. "Okay, Daddy."
I must not play with my little peeper!
~~o~~
Shit. Did he have to go for this discipline thing with such a vengeance! Couldn't he just try one thing at a time! How am I going to stand it! If he catches me coming just sitting here, what would he do then!
I must not play with my little peeper!
God, why did I *ever* ask him to make me write lines! 'Course I never thought he'd also make me sit on this hard, rough plywood with a vibrator in me and a plug in my ass. Ooh, lordy! That plug -- what an orgasm! And to think I was worried about menopause making them less intense! Ha!
I must not play with my little peeper!
That's right, I must not play with my little peeper. Must not. *Must not!* Ooh, Daddy was so sexy, though! So sexy! I wonder if he realizes just how much he turns me on when he takes such a hard line?
I must not play with my little peeper!
Right, 'cause look what it got me! The belt. Oh, *god*! That belt! I'm glad he didn't totally stop either. He was right. He was. I wanted to trust him, and I did tell him I wanted serious discipline.
Exactly *why* did I want that?
"About done there, little one?"
"Yes, Daddy, all done."
"That's a good girl. Take them and your little ass to the bedroom. I'll check your lines in there and see if you've learned your lesson."
~~o~~
"Damn! These wood grain lines are impressive!"
"And they hurt too, Daddy!"
"Let's see...we've got straight ones, and curvy ones, and loopy ones....where's this line lead to..."
"Daddy!"
"Ooh! What have we got here -- get your ass up there higher....spread your legs....wider. Let's reel this line in. Oh! Lookie here, a slick little wiggling egg! My, my, my, now *that* is what I would call *wet*! What a little slut you are! Let's see if there's anything else in there....nope."
"Daddy, please!"
"Did you learn your lesson, my little one?"
"Yes, Daddy!"
"What did you learn?"
"That writing lines makes my little peeper go crazy, Daddy!"
"Oh, you poor thing! Well, maybe you're little peeper will remember next time that when it wants to play, it shouldn't cross that line until you get permission from your Daddy."
"Yes, Daddy. I hope so. But Daddy? My little peeper can't hear you too well. Maybe if you put your little friend inside my little pussy, then you'd have a direct line to my little peeper, and it would hear you loud and clear!"
"Hmmm. Yes, I think that's definitely a line worth pursuing!"
The End
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Reviews
Naomi Darvell <naomi_darvell(at)hotmail(dot)com>
Very funny, quirky ageplay piece with multi-level puns on the word "lines." I don't know quite what it is about Louiza's writing that often makes me feel she's describing a scene which has actually happened-- and recently, too!
Pablo <Pablo(dot)Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
A nicely vivid stream-of-consciousness musing on the tension between what you want and don't want, what you ask for and what you get. Interleaving cute dialogue with the repetition of line-writing creates a lovely structural counterpoint, and the whole thing wraps up exactly how it should.