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Category: Adult, a Spanking Dialog
Janice and Christine, a Spanking Dialog
By
Don A. Landhill <Dlandhill@aol.com>
"Janice, I'm home. Janice, where are--"
"Well, Christine. I'm glad to see you finally made it home. Would you care to explain the disaster you left this morning?"
"Uh, Janice, I'm sorry, but I was running late, and. Let me get on it right away, I'll have things tidy in no time."
"Not so fast, Young Lady. When you moved in with me we made an agreement about shared chores, didn't we? Including getting home in time to help
cook, or calling if there would be a delay? Did I miss your call?"
"No, Janice, I didn't call, and I'm sorry. But Tom asked me to have a drink with him after work, and he is *such* a hunk. I just didn't realize how late it was."
"I see. Not much of an excuse, is it? Nor is this the first time, is it Christine?"
"Well, Janice, I--"
"And the telephone bill came today. Didn't we agree that $40 was all you could afford, on your budget? But you have $195 of long distance on here. Will
you be able to pay that, along with the rent?"
"Uh, well, Janice, if I could have a little time, maybe till the middle of next month? I'll be very careful until then, and--"
"I see, you can't. If you can't act as an adult in doing chores, keeping appointments, sticking to a budget, or running up bills, then you lose your adult status with me, until you earn it back. You are now little Chrissie at home, not
grown up Christine."
"But Janice--"
"Unless you would like to move? -- I thought not. Now, little Chrissie, you are going to be punished for your misbehavior, and you will mind Auntie Janice.
Clear?"
"But Janice--" {Smack} "Oww!"
"I said, `is that clear?' young lady. And you will address me as `Auntie' or `Ma'am'.
"Ow. Yes, Ma'am"
"For coming home late you are grounded, Chrissie, for a week. That means straight home, and no going out afterwards, and an early bedtime. Since you can't seem to limit your calls, your phone privileges are withdrawn for three weeks. And for the mess this morning, you are getting a good bare-bottom spanking. Any further misbehavior will earn similar punishments, as will any disobedience.
Now get that bottom bare, young lady."
[Later] "Oh that hurts. Please, ma'am, I'll be good. No more spanking, please."
"Up with you, Little Chrissie. Nose in that corner, stand still, no rubbing. I want ypu to think about why you were spanked, and how you plan to behave from now on."
[Still Later] "Please, Auntie, can I come out of the corner now? I'll be good."
"Yes you may come out Time for a quick supper, you'll do the dishes, and then it's off to bed for my naughty girl. Oh Chrissie, I think this arrangement will be a big improvement around here, don't you?"
"Yes, ma'am."
The End
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Reviews
John Benson <johnb(at)ssec(dot)wisc(dot)edu>
This is a rather standard 'how spankings start' tale, except that it's told completely through dialog. It's an interesting technique. The writer is constrained. No descriptions, no stage business, no interior reactions. Only dialogue. The reader is not so much watching the scene as listening through a keyhole.
It's a technique which would be tedious to enforce for a longer work, but it fits well into the frame of a short story. Interesting effect.
Frank <sswitcher(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Ageplay is not normally my thing, but this captivating dialog was easily able to overcome my slight initial prejudices. The all-dialog format is very effective, allowing the author to develop characterization and action simultaneously. Although she reminds me somewhat of Anne Robinson on "The Weakest Link", I found myself attracted by Janice's maturity, and envious of the power and authority that she is able to exercise over the more weak-willed Christine.