This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult; parody of Ray Charles' Hit The Road, Jack
Hit The Rack, Jack
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Hit the rack, Jack,
Ma'am, wha'd'you say? Hit the rack, Jack,
Whoa, Mistress, oh Mistress, oh you treat me so mean
That's right! Hit the rack, Jack,
Ma'am, wha'd'you say? Hit the rack, Jack,
Now Ma'am, please Ma'am,
Don't mind if I do, cause it's understood
Well, your wishes I will obey
That's right! Hit the rack, Jack,
Ma'am, wha'd'you say? Hit the rack, Jack,
Well.... An' don'tcha gimme flack no more Ma'am, wha'd'you say? An' dontcha gimme flack no more I didn't understand it An' dontcha gimme flack no more Oh! You mean that! An' dontcha gimme flack no more Yes, Ma'am, I understand that! |
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2001
Reviews
Mija <mijita(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Cute parody that scans well. I liked the way the back and forth refected on the original song. It made it easy to hear Ray Charles singing it.
Though I'm not sure I'll ever be able to get the picture of him being tied to the rack (by Tina Turner in my version) and whipped on his feet out of my head!
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
In this song parody, Louiza turns Ray Charles' classic Hit the Road, Jack into a femdom passion play of sorts. Hit the Rack, Jack is well thought out and very catchy.