This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Child
A Word to the Wise
By
Alex Birch <alexbirch@blueyonder.co.uk>
She sat on the bed sulking, blue eyes pricking with tears as she waited..Fifteen and sent to her room like some little kid! So what was he gonna do now? Another lecture about her behaviour, another grounding ? He just didn't see any of it!! She dried her eyes as she heard his footsteps then, after a gentle knock, her dad was standing gazing down at her, hurt rather than angry.
'I think, baby, you and I need to talk!' he said softly and she affected disinterest but her eyes were wet. He sat down beside her and gazed into her face.
'Rachel, what am I to do with you? Fits of temper, staying out late, resentment. What have I done to deserve this? Since mommy died you have been my little rock and now you behave like a stranger. Why?'
'Dunno!' she muttered and folded her arms angrily
'Well I do...' he said quietly '...and its about time we spoke about it. You want me to take down your panties and spank your bare bottom. You've provoked me for weeks now just to get a spanking.'
Her face reddened and her mouth dropped open. She tried to scream 'No, no' but she was defeated by the truth. It was all she'd thought about for ages. Her wonderful daddy baring her bottom and making it sore. Ever since she'd found all those sites.
'Good, you havent denied it...' he said gently '..and that's a start. You didn't hide your tracks very well. You left a history trail all over the PC!'
Suddenly the shame was too much and she burst into tears then felt his reassuring hand in hers.
'Youre not sick, love, or perverted...' he whispered softly '...just a lonely adolescent girl growing into a woman. You have feelings you cant explain , needs you cant satisfy and I know you love me very much. That's why your moods were so hard to take'
'Needing a spanking isnt kinky...' he said '...and Ive never told you this but I used to spank mommy sometimes as part of our loving relationship because we understood each other's needs. It is sexy, it does make a couple feel horny and that's why it would be wrong for me to spank you...even if you've deserved it. Its something , like sex, that should be negotiated between two adults who care sexually for each other , not a father and daughter' .
She was listening open mouthed now as he continued.
'Its been tough lately, I know that, with mommy and school and you so badly want a boyfriend to touch you. It will all come in time, believe me. But don't squander the beauty of the real thing for cheap thrills at the hands of your old man. Because I deserve more respect than that, don't I? So don 't ever try that again!'
She was crying loudly now as she flung her arms around her fathers neck and whispered 'I love you so much daddy' and he knew she did.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2001
Reviews
Mija <mijita(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Poor girl! She probably didn't like being a 'little rock' for him. ;)
There was something very real and very unreal about the father / daughter conversation. It left me feeling embarrassed and uncomfortable for how provocative I found it. My own voyeurism at being in this scene catching me out.
Jodi <ladiejj(at)webtv(dot)net>
This is a very well written story. It flows well. It deals with a sensitive subject in a realistic way. The author has given the reader characters that you can relate to as well as feel for.