This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
A Moment in Time
By
Lil Imp <imp_all_day@hotmail.com>
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© Copyright Summer, 2001
Reviews
Haron <aster(at)mail(dot)i(dot)com(dot)ua>
Unusual in form and squirmy-hot in content, this frozen single moment of time could be a framed picture in a spanko's study. Tops would seek inspiration from it, and bottoms might be deterred from future misbehaviour. This is a little picture of things that are near and dear to many spanko people, and sums bottoms' laments and tops' determination very neatly.
Pablo <Pablo(dot)Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
The simplicity of language here effectively matches the simplicity of the moment, the reassuring ritual, how it makes everything right again. This is like settling into a hot bath, and feeling aches fade away. Perhaps could have been made a touch more vivid with a specific detail or two, rather than generalities, but then universality is the point here.