Reviews
- Aftermath
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Reviewed in Rogue
Review No. 458
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Reviewed in Celestial
Reviews 346 – November 17, 1999
"Aftermath"
by Pami . Guest review by
Dave Myers.
The "good girl/bad
girl" phenomenon is so very strong in our culture. We go to
great lengths to get each other to view one another in just exactly
the kind of light we deem necessary to satisfy our need to be accepted.
That can mean sanitizing
sex to be good enough, or trying to act bad in order to be bad enough.
The desire to sit on the fence and get our lovers to see us as good
girls/bad girls or good boys/bad boys at exactly the moment we want
them to is at the heart of so many relationships. It's tempting
to say that it's not far from the center of every sexual relationship.
And so it is nice
to see a story which really intelligently attacks this topic and
gives it the treatment deserved.
Aftermath is a sequel
to a very good story in it's own right. The plot is that a woman
has acted bad for her master, and sort of shocked herself with how
bad she was, and how good it was. But now, the reality is setting
in about just where her limits are, and she's decided she likes
the bad girl thing, but she'll just be not quite as bad as she was
before. And that'll be good. Got that?
No really, that's
pretty much how it happens. Only the writing is so much better than
the writing in this review it's not funny. Make sure to read "The
Auction" , which is the pre-quel to this story. It's excellent
in it's own way, and a little "harder" for those that
like it that way.
- A Midmorning Snack
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Reviewed in Tainted
Lime Reviews nº 40
– May 13, 2002
The The things that
happen in the Walmart parking lot. The woman in this story has just
bought a new yellow SUV with one of those inflatable mattresses
in the back. And she is horny as hell. She calls her latest flame
and lets him know she can't wait, and he obliges her by jumping
in the back and giving that blow-up bed a rip-roaring test drive.
The best part of this
story is the insatiable lust the participants have for one another.
And while there isn't much in the way of a plot, it is a vivid,
sexy scene.
- New Beginnings
- Paybacks Are A Bitch
- Pet
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Reviewed in: Rogue
Review No. 448
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Reviewed in: Review-lite
- What David Thinks 18
"Pet"
by Pami (F/M D/S)
This story is in
5 chapters. The chapters show an evolution of a relationship. The
relationship between what turns out to be a dominant woman and submissive
man. It starts via email, a bit cliche but easily forgiven with
the ensuing story. We are shown both characters views of events,
and we struggle with the new feelings that arise in the man. Curiously,
we don't ever get to know their names. Simply He and She. That works
very well in this story. Pami does a great job of describing everything,
and has a good style. I thought the characters rang true, and the
action between them was great, very sexy and fun. This story could
easily be continued (and I'd like that), but I think the most important
part of the story is told here, and leads to a satisfying conclusion.
- The Anatomy of an Orgasm... or Two... or Twenty...
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Reviewed in: Crimson
Reviews - #3 - 30-Jul-2002
"Anatomy
of an Orgasm {Pami} (MF,
descriptive sex)
Pami knows what she's
doing. In the prelude, Pami tells us that this is an attempt at
a stroke story, that there isn't much in the way of character development.
And she's right. This story is hot descriptions of a woman's flight
into an afternoon of anonymous, mindless pleasure. But where Pami's
wrong is that this story doesn't have character. It does -- even
if it isn't a classic case of it.
Our nameless narrator
is hot, and wet, and tries to go to work anyway. At work, an abject
failure, she decides to head home, and even though she knows that
it perhaps makes her the sluttiest girl in creation, finds a way
to satisfy herself. And satisfy herself. And satisfy herself.
Make no mistake,
this is a stroke story, and a hot one at that. Pami's style and
attention to detail, both descriptive and technical, make up for
any lack of heavy plot or character development. The fact is, this
story has lighter versions of both, even if it isn't completely
obvious.
The only criticism
that I can make is that I didn't see the need to switch perspectives
near the end of the story. But that's Pami's prerogative as the
writer.
You won't see me
giving many tens and nines to stroke fiction, in any categories
-- not my style. But this one is an exception.
Technical : 10
Eros : 10
Character/Plot : 9
Crimson : 9"
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Reviewed in The
Annex Reviews, 8/10/02
'Anatomy of an Orgasm
[A]
Where posted: ASSM
When posted: 7/28/02
Author: Pami
Author address: pamil1968@aol.com
Type: M/F, cons
The author calls
this "a short and intense stroke story."
The horny narrator
finds a date online for some no-strings-sex, and is pleased at the
nerdiness of his profile ("The type of guy who would have been
a nerd in high school. But she knew what nerds were BEST at. ")
He comes over, and they have sex.
That's all there was
to the story -- and that's all the writer strived for -- so I can't
really say any more beyond "it was hot." But I did enjoy
it, especially the protagonist's insatiability, and the good use
of a nerd. Is "cuntal" really a word, though?'
- The Auction
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Reviewed in: Celestial
Reviews #313: January 18, 1999
"The
Auction" by Pami
Review by: Tiramisu
I liked this story
a lot.
A woman is presented
by her master to be auctioned off for 10 hours. She is his slave,
but is happy to be so.
I liked the way the
author described the slave: she stood tall...held her head high.
Her master was proud of her, she was vibrant and intelligent, and
he noted that "some men had beaten all spirit out of their
slaves." He would never do that. There is no coercion or abuse
in this story. The slave is a strong character, and this makes the
story stronger.
And of course, the
way she is attired is extremely sexy.
It takes just a few
paragraphs to set the scene through the thoughts of slave and master,
and then the action quickly moves to the present. This seems just
about right. The erotic excitement builds nicely, and details are
richly described. More important, (and more difficult) the thoughts
of the characters are nicely revealed. Generally, shifting of viewpoint
between slave and master is smooth and it is clear whose thoughts
we are reading.
There is a lot packed
into a relatively short story. I thought the amount of action, psychology,
and detail were all excellent, and these elements were well balanced.
I also liked the subtle point that the master also was taking a
risk in this auction.
A few specific things
I liked:
The use of the word
vulva. A good word which we don't see often enough.
The ending. It doesn't
just stop. The story manages to have an ending, while allowing for
a sequel.
The way the auction
winner talks to her, working on her mind.
A few specific things
I didn't like:
Long paragraphs.
This is especially true for the opening, and the first paragraph
in particular where two different viewpoints are contained in the
same paragraph.
At one point, it
wasn't clear which "channel" was being used.
The way the word
"slut" was used, or overused: I prefer strong words like
this to be used sparingly and with purpose. In his thoughts, her
Master thinks of her as "his slut". To me, that word has
strong derogatory connotations, and he doesn't think of her that
way. I might have overlooked this, but later she is called "slut"
many times by the auction winner, perhaps to emphasize her submission.
This is an apt enough use of the word, but in combination with the
first use of the word, it didn't feel right.
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Finally, the
ratings. I hesitate to give a perfect 10 in the technical category,
even though it is probably as well written as other stories
which have gotten 10's.
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Pandora (Story
Codes/Genre): MF, con, BDSM
Athena(Technical and Grammar): 9
Venus (Plot and Character): 10
Tiramisu (Appeal to Reviewer): 10
- The Club
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Spotlighted in: "Souvie's
O's - July 22nd"
"Pami - 'The Club'
(M/F, rom)
http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2000/25366
http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2000/25367
or the HTML version on her website at
http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/Pami/www/the_club.html
The narrator, you never
learn names in this story, places an online ad. Seems she's looking
for a man who can keep up with her. In my opinion, she meets her
match (and then some).
This story has some
of the hottest sex I've read in quite a while. Maybe it's because
the guy in the story does a lot of things that turn me on. Or maybe
it's the fact that no names are used and it's easier to put myself
in the woman's place. Whichever is true, it works for me.
If I had any complaint,
it would be that I think the story ends abruptly. However, it didn't
bug me enough to where it took my mind off the sex. Want to read
a sexy sex story? Head on over to one of the url's and check this
one out."
Souvie
- The Key
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Reviewed in: Celestial
Reviews 319 – March 14, 1999
" The
Key " by Pami
This is a quickie
about a high school teacher who falls asleep while preparing lessons
and wakes up to find his girlfriend seated on his desk with her
pussy ready for action. She has let herself in. Then she lets him
in. It's a cute little story, if you're willing to believe that
English teachers actually do things like this.
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Ratings for "The
Key":
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Athena (technical
quality): 9
Venus (plot &
character): 7
Celeste (appeal
to reviewer): 7
- The King and I
- The Meeting
- The Quest for the Holy Grail....NOT!
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Reviewed in: Review
Lite - What David Thinks - 19
"The
Quest for the Holy Grail....NOT!" By Pami
(MF)
You kind of have
to be in on the idea of the
Fantasy Train to 'get' this story, but then that's the whole
idea of the site. Check it out. Lots of good stories there, including
this one. Pami gets extremely well-fucked by a man on a camel, while
they are both riding the camel. The train has taken her to King
Solomon's time, to find "the Queen of Sheba's Ivory Dildo".
I don't think it gives too much away to say she does indeed eventually
find it, but not before the previously mentioned sex on a camel.
Pami has a great style, which I always like, and her sex scenes
are hot, even if they weren't taking place in the desert.
As an aside, I've
read about two thirds of the stories on the
Fantasy Train , and all of them are at least good, most are
great.
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