After reading your note to the MSS group, i decided to go and read what you wrote. Well, i could not help myself, i read the whole story at one sitting!
What a marvelous way you wrote. At times, i could almost feel myself getting caught up with LA.
Although, i would have preferred a different ending, something that would keep the reader begging for more.
Thank you for taking me away while i read "THE ACCIDENTAL SUB".