The Secret, Part 17

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For the next two weeks, Trevor observed silently as Michelle took every opportunity to pursue the promise she had made to her husband.

The incidences were relatively subtle, but as Trevor was aware of his wife's motives, he was able to look on with a mixture of excitement, anticipation and sheer admiration or the boldness of Michelle's actions.

Tom had always been a frequent visitor to their house, either with his wife Tracey and Sara, their six year old daughter, or on his own, but now Michelle seemed to always be finding excuses or reasons to require her son's presence at the family home. On the occasions he did visit, Trevor also picked up the subtle differences in Michelle's behaviour. The middle aged woman was never overt or pushy, but there was no doubt that she was subtly flirting with his son & taking every opportunity to encourage Tom to see her in a light other than as his mother. It was just a series of seemingly unrelated incidents, the bushing of an arm here, the unbuttoning of a blouse there and even on one of Tom's visits, Michelle greeting her son wrapped only in a towel as though she had been disturbed in the act of taking a shower.

Despite the joint nature of the plan, Trevor said nothing, appreciating that the more he left this to his wife alone, the more he could be certain that Michelle was participating in the scheme for her own purposes and not just to please her husband.

Finally, after almost exactly two weeks of preparation, Trevor returned home from school to find that Michelle was waiting for him in their lounge.

"Good day Trev"? she asked.

"Excellent day love" he replied, before adding.

"Of course, it helps when I have that little pussy around most of the time"

Michelle laughed out loud.

She could barely comprehend that she accepted her husbands description of a six year old pupil as little pussy, but she knew that is exactly how they both regarded Bryony now.

"Talking of little pussy, Tom tells me that Tracey is taking Sara on a Rainbow's outing this evening, so he is going to be at a loose end for three or four hours"

Trevor raised his eyebrows at his wife's use of the same expression to describe their granddaughter, but mentally, he was also aware of the image of the six year old in her Rainbow uniform and he shifted his position as his cock began to stiffen.

Michelle looked her husband directly in the eye as she spoke again.

"So I was thinking that maybe you could make yourself scarce for a couple of hours while I go about getting Tom to fuck me"

Trevor returned his wife's gaze.

"You really think you can make that happen Miche"?

Michelle laughed out loud again and she was still smiling as she replied.

"Oh ye of little faith"

Michelle rose and began leaving the room, so that Trevor found himself following her up the stairs.

"Sweetheart would you have any objection if I gave Mark a ring to see if I can go over there while you work on Tom"?

Michelle stopped and turned towards her husband before kissing him on the top of his head.

"Trev, the whole reason I'm working on this insane plan is so that we can get to Bryony and Sara as often as we please"

"Frankly, the thought of you getting Bryony's knickers off at the same time as I hope Tom will be getting into mine is just the sort of turn on I need to go through with this"

The married couple began getting ready for their respective evenings in a calm, comfortable silence, punctuated only by small talk about their respective days and by a brief conversation that Trevor had with Mark.

The middle aged teacher completed his own preparations, just as his wife was beginning to pull one black, silk stocking over her still shapely thigh.

"Miche I'm going to shoot off now"

Michelle looked up as she continued smoothing the lacy top of a stocking over her leg.

"Trev I just need you to tell me one more time that this is OK with you"

Trevor looked puzzled by his wife's question so Michelle elaborated.

"Look it's not every day a mum gets ready to get fucked by her own son so I just need to know this is not going to cause a problem between us in the future"

As Michelle spoke, it occurred to Trevor that she was getting ready to fuck someone other than him for the first time in her life. As that thought dawned on him, he picked up on Michelle's need for reassurance.

Trevor moved towards the bed and helped Michelle to stand so that he could envelop her in his arms, before he whispered into her ear.

"Lover I know why you are doing this and I cannot tell you how much of a turn on that is"

"Now go fuck our son while I go play with that little pussy"

Michelle eased out of the embrace.

"Sweet talker" she replied.

Thirty minutes later, Trevor found himself knocking on Mark's door.

Unusually, the door was not opened immediately, so that Trevor actually found himself wondering whether some problem had cropped up since he had spoken with Mark earlier in the evening.

With some relief, Trevor eventually heard footsteps on the stairs within, before Mark opened the door wide to let his friend enter.

"Mate I have a bit of a surprise for you but fuck me you are keen aren't you"

Mark was grinning as he spoke again.

"You have not exactly given us a lot of notice have you"

Trevor returned the younger man's smile, but there was also a knowing glint in his eye as he answered.

"What can I say"

"I'm addicted to your daughter's cunt"

Both men were laughing now and Mark called out as he turned to climb the stairs.

"Make yourself at home Trev we are nearly done up here"

Trevor settled himself into one of the comfy armchairs in Mark's lounge and he was joined by the younger man after a couple of minutes.

The two exchanged small talk regarding the weather, Bryony's progress at school, the results of the local football team and a couple of other inconsequential subjects, until they were interrupted by a hesitant voice calling from outside the partially closed door to the lounge.

"Daddy I'm ready"

The mere sound of Bryony caused Trevor's mind to start racing.

"OK pumpkin come on in then" mark responded.

The six year old blonde entered the room and much to his own surprise Trevor heard himself exclaim out loud.

"Oh jesus"

Bryony was wearing an all white outfit. The upper half of the set, comprised a little top with spaghetti straps running across each of the child's otherwise bare shoulders. The garment itself was little more than a strip of material that covered the top half of Bryony's chest while leaving her slim tummy completely exposed. The bottom half of the set comprised a tiny mini skirt that in all circumstances would be considered bordering on the indecent. The waistband was cut low on the young girl's hips so that the edging barely concealed the very top of the preteens cunny mound. The hem of the skirt ran across the very tops of Bryony's thighs so that the merest of movements was likely to expose exactly what the youngster was wearing under the skirt. On her feet, Bryony was wearing a pair of silver, strappy sandals and Trevor was both intrigued and delighted to note that the pumps had a little heel on so that Bryony's slim calves were extended slightly by the natural positioning of her legs. The blonde mane on Bryony's head was always immaculately groomed, either in little pigtails or falling over her shoulders, but this evening there seemed to be a more pronounced sheen to her hair so that it shimmered in the early evening light that was cascading in through the window behind Trevor.

As Mark got up from his own chair to pull the blinds on the window closed, he spoke to Trevor.

"You appove"?

Trevor's reply was immediate.

"I think that's the sexiest thing I've ever seen"

"Do you think she looks like a Princess Trev"?

Realising that Mark's question was more for Bryony's benefit than his own, again Trevor answered swiftly.

"I think she's like the most beautiful Princess in the world"

Both men were delighted when their exchange was rewarded by Bryony giving the most illuminating of smiles, so that her entire face was wreathed in a glow of pleasure.

"Bry why don't you show Trevor what else we bought you"

The world seemed to enter a period of slow motion as Trevor watched his preteen lover grasp the hem of her mini skirt and raise the miniscule wrap of material to her waist.

"Oh my god" Trevor exclaimed.

Bryony was wearing a pair of tiny white knickers that seemed to be made of the most sheer material that Trevor could ever remember seeing. Even from the slight distance between them, Trevor could clearly make out the pronounced bulge of Bryony's baby cunny and the slight cleft of her preteen slit. The material made the view almost dreamlike so that Trevor could feast his eyes on the child's pussy and yet still be aware that the view was slightly clouded by the opaque material.

"Turn around little one" Mark ordered.

As Bryony complied, Trevor saw that the back of the little panties were cut into a v shape so that most of the young blonde's tight little buttocks were completely bare. Again, Trevor gave voice to his thoughts.

"Oh fuck" he whispered.

As Bryony stood with her miniscule skirt obediently pulled to reveal her hidden charms, Trevor found his eyes roaming over the little girl's bottom. He was struck yet again by just how tiny the child was and how insanely perverted it was that she was being exposed to such adult sex play. The middle aged teachers eyes flickered over the pale globes of Bryony's bum and once again he found his cock stirring at the pleasure that was about to unfold.

Trevor could have enjoyed the sight in front of him without pause for the next couple of hours, but he was disturbed from his wicked thoughts by the sound of Mark's voice.

"Come here munchkin"

Bryony dropped the hem of her skirt and turned around before running the few paces to her father's lap.

Mark scooped his daughter into his arms and placed her gently on his knees.

Holding Bryony tightly around her slim waist with one hand, Mark began stroking the fingers of his other hand over the child's smooth thighs.

"How about we show Mr Daniels some of the new things I've been showing you little one"?

Bryony replied, seeking clarification.

"OK daddy what shall we show him"?

Mark bent forward to whisper Bryony's ear and was rewarded with a brief squeal of excitement from the youngster.

"I can't do that daddy"

Mark joined in his daughter's sense of fun and excitement.

"Sure you can"

"You can do it to show me that you love me a big bit"

Though Trevor could see that Bryony was still happy and relaxed he could also see that she was clearly considering Mark's request and in particular the last words he had used.

Without another word, Bryony jumped from her fathers lap and moved towards the chair in which Trevor was sitting expectantly.

For a brief moment, the six year old paused in front of her teacher, before suddenly reaching out towards Trevor's lap with both hands.

Using one hand to grip the material of his trousers, Bryony used the other to take hold of the middle aged mans fly zipper. Trevor felt himself tense in sheer anticipation as his preteen lover began to slide the zipper downwards. Once the gaping hole was exposed, Bryony began feeling for the gap in Trevor's boxer shorts and in one movement, she curled her tiny fingers around the throbbing pole of Trevor's erection before pulling his cock free from the garment.

Now Bryony placed both her hands on Trevor's shaft and began a gentle wanking action up and down the still growing organ.

Trevor closed his eyes and leaned further back in his chair so that he could give himself over entirely to the delicious action that Bryony was using on him.

Trevor was so engrossed in his enjoyment that he did not notice Mark leaving his own seat and moving to kneel next to his daughter, until he heard Mark's voice again.

"Now show Mr Daniels what special good girls do with their mouths"

Without missing a stroke on his cock, Bryony opened her mouth and bent over until she could feed the purple tip of Trevor's cock into her tiny mouth. Although her hands were using relatively quick strokes, Bryony's mouth enveloped Trevor's knob before she moved her head slowly up and down to perform the obscene act on her teacher.

Breathing heavily, Mark marvelled once again at what an accomplished little cock sucker his daughter had become at such a tender age. Unlike the uncoordinated fumbling of their early play, Bryony now had a real sense of just how to work a cock with her fingers and how to use her lips and tongue so that the sensitive nerve endings in the knob end were also fully stimulated. The young father felt a surge of lust and desire as he watched his six year old daughter fill her mouth with the cock of another man.

Kneeling behind Bryony, Mark reached under the little white skirt and began gently tugging the child's knickers down her thighs. As the garment bunched at her ankles, Bryony obligingly lifted the little heels of her sandals from the floor one by one so that her father could fully remove the panties from her.

Mark then lay on his back with his head facing towards Trevor and began gently pulling Bryony downwards. As she realised her father's intentions, Bryony let Trevor's cock slip from her mouth so that she could reposition herself. This was a new act of play that Mark had only shown Bryony in recent weeks, but it was one that both had enjoyed so the preteen was happy to go along with Mark's intention. Settling herself into a kneeling position over Mark's face, Bryony squatted downwards until she could feel her baby cunny mound pressing against Mark's mouth and lips. In turn, Mark speared his tongue upwards in a little stabbing motion and was delighted when his very first attempt caused his daughters puffy, pink cunt lips to gently separate so that he found his tongue exploring the sweetest of holes. Once she was in a comfortable position, Bryony began rocking backwards and forwards as she had been taught ,so that her pussy was splayed over her father's face and mouth.

As his cock slipped from Bryony's mouth, Trevor had opened his eyes so that he was witness to the new play and he held his breath at the sheer depravity of the scene in front of him.

Still allowing Bryony to continue her sexy little rocking motion over Mark's face, Trevor fed his cock towards Bryony again and he was delighted when the young blonde opened her mouth wide to accommodate him.

For the first time, Bryony was now being properly used by two adult men at the same time. Her baby cunny being explored and entered by Mark's probing tongue and her sweet mouth filled with Trevor's pulsing prick. Trevor timed the gentle thrusting of his cock with the regular movements of Bryony's hips over her fathers face and the teacher watched as his knob emerged from his child lovers mouth before plunging back in again filling her.

The various couplings continued for a few moments only before Mark pushed his head upwards and stabbed his tongue as far as it would go upwards into Bryony's pea sized little cunny hole. The movement coincided with Trevor pushing his cock towards the back of Bryony's mouth, so the youngster could not exclaim at the intrusion of Mark's tongue deep into her little honey pot, but instead she let out a little muffled gasp.

"OOhhff"

Mark rolled away from between Bryony's widespread thighs.

"Sweetheart I think it's time you took Trevor upstairs for a proper fuck"

"Remember what I told you about how to be a good girl for me"

Bryony pulled her head backwards so that Trevor's cock slipped from her mouth and spoke without hesitation.

"Mr Daniels will you take me upstairs and fuck me please"

Trevor could barely believe what he was hearing and though he knew that Bryony had no real comprehension of what she was asking, the mere sound of her using those words caused Trevor's cock to jerk upwards once more.

Mark smiled tenderly as he turned Bryony to face him once more.

"You are my special girl Bry" he said warmly.

As Bryony began to leave the room, Trevor stood to follow her, but he was halted by Mark's hand on his arm.

"Be harder with her this time"

Trevor turned to his friend.

"Harder"?

Mark looked intently at the older man.

"I don't mean to hurt her or force anything" Mark added.

"I just want you to be harder and more urgent with her"

Trevor was still not entirely sure what was being asked of him, but he responded anyway.

"OK mate"

By the time the exchange of words between the two men had finished, Bryony was already half way up the stairs.

Despite having been with her teacher lover on numerous occasions now, the little blonde was nervous and not a little worried at what was about to unfold. Her daddy had already told her that he would be letting Mr Daniels be alone with her in his bedroom and he had explained that her teacher would certainly want to rub his cock over her noony until he spurted, but the whole scenario was simply beyond her comprehension. The six year old knew she wanted to please her father and also knew that her teacher would enjoy her letting him do things to her, but in her mind she could not help but be a little worried about exactly what was in store for her.

Bounding up the stairs behind Bryony, Trevor was also aware that his attitude to the little girl had changed. Previously he had been excited beyond belief whenever the chance to play with Bryony came along, but he had always somehow been conscious of her age. Perhaps because of the familiarity of the situation or more likely because of Mark's final words to him, Trevor was now aware that he was getting Bryony upstairs to fuck her, pure and simple.

On entering the bedroom, Bryony turned to face her adult lover and Trevor was struck once more by just how beautiful and sexy the young blonde looked this evening. The perverted teacher was especially struck again by the impossibly tiny skirt that Bryony was wearing and the fact that now she was completely bare under the brief garment.

Trevor knelt down so that his face was level with Bryony's.

"You are the sexiest thing I have ever seen"

As he spoke, Trevor ran his hands under the edge of his preteen lovers crop top so that his fingers alighted on the little points of Bryony's nipples. Pinching his thumb and forefinger together, Trevor gently pinched the tip of each nipple and he was even more aroused by the gasp that escaped Bryony's lips.

"OOhh"

"Ouch"

Without pause, Trevor then leaned forward and began to French kiss his young pupil, pushing his tongue deep into Bryony's mouth so that the gasp of shock from Trevor's attention to her chest was cut off in the child's throat. The whole time Trevor explored the youngsters mouth, he alternated between gently stroking Bryony's nipples and sharply nipping them between his thumb and finger.

Breaking away from the kiss, Trevor then moved Bryony backwards until her thighs hit the mattress on Mark's bed and the child was forced to sit down.

Trevor smiled as he noticed that there was a new tube of lubricant gel already placed on the bed and he silently thanked Mark for his advance preparations.

"Lay down sweetheart"

Bryony did as she was instructed and Trevor was delighted to note that the little girls skirt no longer concealed the sweet honey pot between her legs.

"Good girl Bry now open your legs wide for me"

Again, Bryony did exactly as she was told and Trevor watched in fascination as she spread her thighs wide apart.

No matter how many times he had seen the six year old pussy nestling in between Bryony's thighs, Trevor was always in awe of this moment.

From the very first time in the stock room at school, Trevor was aware of just how delicious the sight of preteen cunny was. He had no idea whether or not Bryony's pussy was especially cute, but he knew for certain that child cunt would also hold an appeal for him that far outweighed the pleasure he now obtained from Michelle's adult pussy.

The separation of Bryony's thighs had caused her sweet cunny mound to flatten slightly, but had also caused her tiny pussy lips to part in the slightest of openings. The preteens pussy was clearly divided into the two separate halves of her baby peach and the little slit ran as a deep crease between the twin mounds.

In silence, Trevor picked up the tube of gel, unscrewed the cap and began liberally applying the lubricant to Bryony's cunny. The middle aged teacher used the tips of four of his fingers to work the fragrant ointment into Bryony's mound and the tip of just one finger to gently push a generous scoop of the liquid into the youngsters pussy hole.

Once he was satisfied, Trevor stood and removed his trousers and boxer shorts so that his cock sprang upright in anticipation of being pressed into child cunt.

Trevor spoke again in a far more commanding tone.

"Roll over onto your tummy"

As soon as Bryony had shifted her position, Trevor gabbed hold of the youngsters hips and roughly pulled her slim body down the bed until the little girl was half standing and half bent over her fathers mattress.

Dropping his hold around her waist, Trevor now held onto each of Bryony's wrists so the child was forced to allow her arms to be slightly bent behind her back. In that position, Trevor was able to manoeuvre the six year old into the position he required of her and, as he did so, he pushed his own hips forward so that his cock was forced between Bryony's thighs. Initially, Trevor felt his straining knob end jam up against Bryony's cunny mound, but then his cock slipped underneath her so that it now slid between her pussy and her tummy and he felt the preteens slightly parted cunt caressing his swollen organ. Trevor settled into a comfortable, sensual rhythm as he continued to massage his cock with baby cunny flesh.

Looking down at his lover, Trevor was struck at just how easy Bryony was to manipulate in this position. The little blondes body was rocked backwards and forwards and Trevor could feel a little shudder each time his cock began a new journey sliding over Bryony's pussy. Over and over, Trevor pulled Bryony against him as he thrust his prick between her parted thighs.

As ever, the combination of the physical and mental stimulation meant that Trevor was never going to last long before he felt his climax beginning to build.

Abruptly, he jerked his cock away from between Bryony's legs before flipping the girl over so that she was once more laying on her back. As she was turned, Bryony inadvertently closed her legs, so Trevor was compelled to speak again.

"Open your legs little one"

Trevor continued to talk as Bryony once more spread her little legs wide in the most obscene of offerings.

"Bry say you want me to fuck you"

Bryony's face was passive, but she clearly did not understand precisely what was being asked of her.

"Sweetheart just say I want you to fuck me Trevor"

As Bryony finally understood, it was her high pitched voice that now echoed in the bedroom.

"I want you to fuck me Trevor" she said.

Taking his cock in one hand, Trevor began to push the purple knob end against Bryony's pretty little pussy.

"Say it again little one"

"I want you to fuck me Trevor" Bryony responded.

As she spoke, Trevor jammed the very tip of his cock head against the most secret of openings at the bottom of Bryony's baby cunny slit and he both saw and felt as the child's flesh parted as much as was possible at her tender age.

Trying to make sure that as much of his cock as possible was buried inside his preteen lovers pussy, Trevor began to fuck the six year old vigorously.

Bryony's tiny body was pushed violently by the insistence of Trevor's movements, so that the middle aged man was forced to hold the youngsters hips in an effort to hold her against his urgent fucking. Over and over and over, he pushed his hips backwards and forwards at an increasingly frenetic pace.

Finally, the delicious friction of six year old cunt on his cock became too much for Trevor and he felt his cock began to contract as his climax started to rumble deep in his balls. Jet upon jet of hot, sticky cum erupted from Trevor's knob and squirted into Bryony's little cunny hole.

"AAArrggghhh"

"Oooohhhh"

"OOhh"

"Oh fuck"

With each ejaculation, Trevor found he was unable to keep quiet and his gasps and moans continued as he filled Bryony with his cream.

For most of his orgasm, Trevor's eyes were tightly closed, but he eventually opened them as the spurts of cum began to subside slightly.

Looking down, Trevor could see that the very tip of his cock was still lodged in the parting of Bryony's pussy, but that his cum was now spilling from the child's cunt and welling up over his knob end before cascading over Bryony's mound, thighs and tummy. Eventually, the last few drops of cum dribbled from Trevor and landed on the carpet at the foot of Mark's bed.

Trevor was just about to speak when he heard Mark's voice from behind.

"My turn"

Almost in a daze, Trevor moved from in between Bryony's thighs and he was immediately replaced by his younger friend.

Mark was already naked and erect, so that he could instantly duplicate Trevor's action on his daughter.

As he pressed his own cock against Bryony's cunny, Mark was aware of his knob end sliding through the still leaking cum of the older man and he used that lubrication to force his cock inside Bryony's baby pussy.

For the second time in a matter of minutes, Bryony found herself being fucked and she was aware once again of the very tip of an adult mans cock head pushed slightly inside her secret opening.

"You are my beautiful good girl" Mark told his daughter as he began fucking her in the same urgent motion that Trevor had used moments before.

If anything, Mark's climax arrived even more quickly than Trevor's so that barely a dozen strokes had been achieved before he too was filling Bryony with even more sticky cum.

This time, barely any of her fathers jism welled inside Bryony because she was still full from the earlier assault on her. Now Mark's cum oozed immediately from her and pooled with Trevor's, so that the six year old was liberally covered in spunk across the whole of her mound and tummy.

Mark's climax was accompanied by a series of loud gasps, until finally he used words of some sense.

"Oh my fucking Christ"

"I love you so much Bryony"

As she felt her dad's cock slip slowly away from her violated pussy, Bryony smiled broadly.

"I love you too daddy"

As Trevor was in no rush to get home, he waited downstairs while Mark bathed his daughter and put her to bed.

As he entered the lounge, Mark asked whether Trevor would like to say goodnight to the now resting child and Trevor found himself kneeling on the floor in Bryony's bedroom next to the sleepy child.

Trevor gently stroked Bryony's blonde hair before leaning over to kiss her cheek.

"Sleep tight sweetheart sweet dreams"

Trevor returned downstairs and the two men spoke briefly about the events of the evening before Trevor eventually explained that he should probably be getting back home.

As he entered his own house, Trevor was aware that the downstairs was in darkness, but there were sounds of movement coming from the marital bedroom upstairs. Trevor entered the bedroom just as Michelle was returning from the en suite bathroom, having obviously just showered.

Trevor smiled and was delighted to note that his wife returned that smile warmly.

"How was your evening Miche" he asked

Michelle laughed excitedly.

"Well I think I'd describe it as successful" she answered.

Trevor pressed his wife for detail.

"Meaning"?

Moving towards her husband, Michelle gave the answer Trevor had been hoping for.

"Meaning that our son just fucked me senseless"

The married couple lay in bed together as Michelle gave a brief resume of the evening she had just spent with Tom.

As she finished her account, Michelle made one final comment.

"Trev I want a reward for what I've just done"

Trevor was intrigued as he answered.

"Such as"?

"I want to spend a night with Bryony" Michelle answered.

"Just her and me no boys allowed"

Trevor smiled.

"I'm sure Mark will be up for that love I'll talk to him tomorrow"

Michelle snuggled into her husbands embrace.

"Trev out of interest how do you plan to use this to get to Sara"?

"Oh that's easy baby" Trevor replied and then added.

"Blackmail"

Before setting off for school the next morning, Trevor made two phone calls.

The first was to Mark to put Michelle's request to their friend and Trevor was delighted when Mark agreed without hesitation.

The second was to his son.

"Tom it's dad you and I need to talk about last night mate"

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biddyboy

OMFG that was great, excellent writing, at one point i was in the room with them, it was so vivid. Can't wait for the next installment.

younglvr uk

another excellent instalment brilliantly written

fantasyrpguy690

Perfect series, love the direction this is going. I'm sure many others love this series as well.

trueblue

Another good episode but I feel that a description of Michelle getting her son to fuck her would have been so sexy,as I am sure she would have drained his cock dry !

qwerty

We are eager to find out how Trevor makes an agreement with his son. It would be good if there are all kinds of benefits for Tom too, not only threats.

BadDaddy

These stories are getting better and better each time I read them. Keep it up, mate.

So wet

I have never commented before, but these stories have made me cum time and time again. Just can't get enough of them. Michelle is my fantasy me.

sex writer

You tell a very hot realistic story. Thinking of your sweet young English girl Bryony, gets me off every time.

freemy

This narrative going now for 17 episode never ceases to amaze me. I love where this is going. Perhaps a description of Miche with her son, through an audio recording she made for the occasion, would be nice as well. Super! Keep it up. x

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