Lessons Learned, Part 1

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Published: 18-Mar-2012

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Chapter 1

It was a cold and blustery Friday evening when Sue's mother let her off at her father's house to spend the weekend. Every since Sue's mother and father had gotten a divorce she had been spending every other weekend with her father.

Sue liked going to her father's house. When they pulled into the drive, her mother opened the door and let her out. Be good dear, she had said, I will see you Sunday evening. I will, Sue replied as she ran to the front door. Her mother watched her until she entered the house and then left.

Sue being used to her father's house over the last year, never knocked any more when she entered the house. This time was no different. It was cold outside and she was in a hurry to get into the house where it was warm. Up the walkway she hurried and opening the door, went inside. The front door entered the house into a hallway with the living room off to the right. Sue looked into the living room as she continued down the hallway. Usually her father would be siting in the living room watching some move on TV. Today he wasn't there.

Sue stopped at the coat closet door in the hallway and hung her coat up. She closed the closet door and stood there. The house seemed quieter than it usually did, but she wasn't scared. After all she had just turned fifteen in November and this was the week before Christmas.

Chapter 2

November, Sue thought to herself. She had been fifteen for over a month now. Her mother had always told her she looked older than her age. When she was thirteen she had started her period. It had only been a few months after that, that her mother had taken her to see the doctor. Her mother insisted that she be placed on birth control pills because she didn't want Sue ending up pregnant. Sue hadn't even been dating at that time, but her mother insisted. By the time she had turned fourteen, Sue had been on the pill for almost a year. She stood 4 foot, 4 inches high, weighed 100 pounds, and wore a 34-B bra size. Sue could have passed for almost eighteen years old then. That is what her mother said.

Sue began to believe it too. It seemed like all the boys wanted a date with her. Her mother and father, still together at that time, said no dates you are to young. That made Sue angry with both of them. Since she couldn't go out on dates. She began to hang around the boys at school. She like to flirt with them and liked it when they flirted with her.

Then in the middle of the school year she met Jimmy. Jimmy was a senior and she was only a freshman. She like the idea that someone almost eighteen would pay any attention to her.

Like Jimmy and all the other boys that were chasing Sue, she was a looker. She looked older than the fourteen years she actually was. Any one of the boys would have given anything to have a few hours alone with her. Just a chance to seduce her, a few minutes alone to try and get into her pants. That's all they wanted.

Sue was ignorant though. She didn't realize what they were after. Once her mother had her on the pill, she never talked to her about sex. Since she had been hanging around with Jimmy at school, she had also met some of the older senior high school girls. It seemed like all these girls wanted to talk about was sex. They talked about who was going out with who and which one had fucked which one. Jimmy had been cornering Sue a lot in school. Pulling her into corners and kissing her. She like the way he made her feel.

One Friday afternoon the school was holding a pep rally for a game that evening. Jimmy had persuaded Sue to skip the rally and leave school with him. Sue did and they left in Jimmy's car. Jimmy drove to a secluded spot about ten minutes from the school.

As soon as the car was stopped Jimmy was all over Sue. He was kissing her running his hands all over her body. Before she knew it Jimmy had his hands up her dress and inside her panties. Sue was scared but didn't ask Jimmy to stop. In a few minutes Jimmy had one of his fingers pushed up her cunt and was finger fucking her with it. I don't think we should be doing this Sue finally said to Jimmy.

Jimmy didn't say anything. He opened his door and got out. Sue thought she had made Jimmy mad. Instead he had walked around the car and opened her door.

You are probably right, Jimmy said. We shouldn't be doing that. Come on get out and we can sit on the hood and talk. Sue got out walking around the car with Jimmy. When the reached the front of the car. Jimmy grabbed Sue. He pushed her back against the hood of the car onto her back. Holding her down with one had he reached under her dress and ripped off her panties.

Don't, Sue said loudly, not like this. Jimmy didn't answer, his cock was hard, he was going to fuck this prick tease even if she said no.

Jimmy undid his belt and let his pants fall to the ground. He pulled his shorts down far enough to let his hungry cock jump out. Before Sue could do anything. He leaned forward, his cock finding her cunt. With one hard lunge, Jimmy penetrated her. He pulled back a little and then drove his cock in farther with another hard thrust.

Sue screamed as his cock tore into her pussy. Ripping its way past her hymen. She was no longer a virgin. Stop, Sue screamed. Stop. Jimmy slapped Sue across the face with the back of his hand. Lay still bitch and shut up. You know you wanted me to fuck you and I am. Now shut the fuck up.

Sue just lay there letting Jimmy pound her cunt with his cock. Finally Jimmy grunted and shoved hard into her pussy. She could feel his seed as it filled her sore cunt. Thank God I'm on birth control she thought. I could of gotten pregnant.

Finished Jimmy stood up. Her grabbed the bottom of her dress and wiped his bloody cock clean on it. Then bent down and pulled up his clothes.

Well, what the fuck you still lying on the hood for he told her. Get up and straighten your self up. We are heading back to the school. You don't want to look like you just got fucked he told her.

Chapter 3

Sue took off what was left of her panties. She wiped the dripping cum off her sore pussy and threw the panties in the bushes. There wasn't anything she could do about the spot Jimmy had wiped his cock on her dress. Sue got back into the car brushing her hair.

Sue didn't speak the whole drive back to the school. They had been only gone about forty-five minutes. Jimmy and Sue got out and eased back into the school gym where the pep rally was going on. No one notice them, or so it seemed.

After the rally, as Sue headed down the crowed hall. All she wanted to do was to get out before she had to talk to anyone. It was to late. One of the senior girls caught up with her. I noticed that you and Jimmy skipped the first part of the rally. Where did you go? She ask.

We just went for a ride, Sue told her. Oh shit, Joann said. He took you out to the parking spot didn't he? She didn't answer, but just kept walking. He forced himself on you didn't he? Sue started crying then and couldn't control herself. The rotten mother-fucker raped me, Sue told Joann. He forced me onto the hood of his car, ripped my panties half off and then raped me.

Joann put her arm around Sue and led her towards the outside door of he school. Come on she told Sue you need to get away from here, get a hot shower and then you'll feel better. Reaching Joann's car, they got in and headed for Joann's house. Once side Joann's house, Joann handed Sue a glass with some straight Gin in it. Drink this she told Sue, it will make you feel better. Then you can take a shower and clean up before I take you home.

Sue felt better after the shower and Joann let her borrow a pair of her panties. Then after giving Sue another small glass of Gin, she drove Sue to within a block of her house and let her out.

Chapter 4

That had been almost four months ago. Joann and Sue had become close friends after that. Joann had finally confided in Sue and told her that Jimmy had done the same thing to her, not more than three months before.

Sue had talked to her school consoler about two months after Jimmy had raped her. The consoler told Sue that there wasn't anything they could do now. It had been to long ago and it was her word against Jimmy.

It didn't end there though, the consoler had contacted Sue's mother about the alleged rape of Sue.

Sue's mother didn't say anything to Sue about the consoler telling her. Instead, she confided in her husband that, a senior had raped Sue in school. Sue's mother and father never spoke about it any more.

Her father wondered why Sue had never told them about it. Why she hadn't wanted the boy arrested for raping her.

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dezurtdawg

Okay, so I'm guessing you had these five submissions ready at one time. That means this was submitted before you could read my comment (and others) about your lack of quotation marks.

Next thing you need to learn is that you NEVER, NEVER have more than one person speaking in the same paragraph! (It's a common mistake) Again the idea is to make it easier for your readers to follow what you are trying to convey.

That being said, the only way for you to KEEP your readers is to correct these mistakes and make it easier for your audience to follow your stories.

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