Girl On A Tran (I)

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Published: 3-Aug-2012

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Smell of a girl
Breeze in her face
Hair blowing softly

She sits seeing me
And I can see her
But no one can see that
We see one another

She squirms in her seat
Returning my smile
Allowing a portal to
Open between us

Her boredom has
Caused her blue eyes
To go wand'ring
She avoids me - but
Then looks out the
Window and smiles

I capture her eye and
She tries to escape - she
Runs from my smile yet
Her giggle betrays her

She slowly looks into my
Eyes and enchants them
She offers a fleeting
Glimpse of her soul

The train has coaxed a
Yawn from her lips
She looks at the mother
Who's offered her lap
But glancing at me she
Starts shaking her head

I wish I could be
The back of the seat
Where she nestles
Her ebony head
I hope that the eyes
Which drowsily watch
Me will carry me
Off to her dreams

Face of an angel
Framed in a window
Carried away by a train
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jacqueline_b

WOWWWWW that poem was so poignent (I think thats how you spell it lol) Brilliant

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