"JR, Well, after the long wait, I have
to say it was worth it
(The Charmed Ones,
Phoebe's Awakening)
. As usual, you've
spun a nice tale with the usual Parz touches of pure eroticsm. Although
I have to admit, I'm not a regular viewer of 'Charmed' I don't think that
hurt in that I really got into the story. I would love to see this
actually made into an episode with Doherty, Milano and Combs in their roles
as the Halliwell sisters. You outdid yourself in your physical descriptions,
and the auto erotic scenes with Phoebe were well done. Can't wait until
Part Two. Hurry up!!! Five Stars! Two thumbs up! Three Wolf Howls!
Excellent!" Trent Wolf, writer, 24 May 99
"Regarding
The
Charmed Ones Trilogy, Phoebe's Awakening)
.
I've read a few of your other stories about breast expansion but I liked
this one the most particularly. I'm not one for big breasts and i
liked how you developed the story in this one. Also, the thing about
spells was great and how Phoebe became so desperate. I'm also waiting
to see these sisters fall for each other and eventually sleep w/ one another.
I hope there is more about Amber and Phoebe, however, because Alyssa Milano
is easily the hottest of all of them. So, i'm just writing to say
keep up the good work and where is your web site? I found this story
at The Grey Archive. I'm interested in reading some more non-BE stuff
of yours. One question, however, what is going to happen once Jonathan
acquires all three sisters? It'd be great if he'd use their powers
for his own will....but on whom? Well, great idea anyways :)"
DrWu,
29 May 99
JR, Man that was a great chapter
(The
Charmed Ones Trilogy, Piper's Passion)
and
worth the wait. In your words a 'hot' read. I got hard reading it.
Especially Phoebe and Amber's scenes (he he). Very well done and realistic.
My favorite part of your writing is the dialogue and the little details
you put in the stories. Piper's seduction by Jonathan was nicely
done as well. He's a great villain! I could picture it vividly in my mind.
That's the great thing I like about this story is you can picture the characters/actresses
perfectly. Man, I can't wait until Prue get's hers. How is this going to
end?! :)"
Trent Wolf, Writer, 31 Mar
2000
Regarding
"The
Charmed Ones Trilogy, Part Three (Prue's Prison)"
...
JR, Can you please return to this great fanfic, the first two were brilliant
and i'm looking forward to the third if you ever get around to it, that
is. Please pay more attention to this story as I think the Trilogy
is one of your best works, and i'd hate to see it forgotten."
Dom,
5 Sep 2000
"JR, You're conclusion to
The
Charmed Ones, Prue's Prison
was outstanding.
I think it was worth the wait and in my opinion was the best of the three.
You captured the magical feel of the show very nicely. I can't get enough
of reading about Piper Prue and Phoebe. Alyssa Milano is probably one of
my favorite young stars. There's something about her that lends itself
perfectly to this kind of story. And the villain is probably one of your
most original and interesting. He's very devious in his manipulations.
Awesome read."
Trent Wolf, Writer, 6 Dec 2000
"Really a good read
(The
Charmed Ones Trilogy)
, although I am not familiar
with the series or movie, the story was great. Any possibility of a sequel?"
lin,
8 February 2001