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Sarah's Discoveries by Pocky Catagories:
Review by Shannon:
For some reason I usually don't read stories when the author says at the get-go: "No nonconsensual sex in here." I think it's because I usually feel that such a warning ruins the suspense. I mean, now I KNOW that won't happen, no matter what I may feel the story is leading up to. So what's the point?
Story codes do the same thing: when the codes read "ff" you just know that the female teenage heroine is going to make-out or lick-out some other girl. You know that right off, so no matter what the scene you expect it.
It's stories like this that prove that none of that matters when you have a good author. You might know there isn't going to be nonconsenusal sex, but the tension is still there. Stories like this remind me of movies that are rated "PG-13": you know there isn't going to be any real nudity, or any real violence or blood or anything, but the movie is so compelling that, despite the rating, you still feel real suspense throughout the showing. Afterward you might think, "Gee, why was I ready to look away?? It's rated PG-13!!! I should have known there'd be no gore! I should have known everything would turn out okay!"
This story has many codes. And its author gives an additional warning: don't expect any non-censual sex, or any scat, or any pee-scenes. Don't any of these facts fool you, though: the story is suspenseful. You may know what not to expect, but believe me, you don't know what to expect. I won't spoil it here, either! You've got to read it to see.
You will be drawn in. The story will take turns you won't expect. And the heroine, a 15-year-old girl named Sarah, may just end up being the most compelling sexual character to appear on the Internet since Becky went to the farm.
Read this story, if you don't read any of the others I've posted on this site. It's not only hot (I got wet, which is rare, just halfway through), but it's good.
And fun. And surprising! Rating: A Read Sarah's Discoveries |