Beauty is Iron

What a fantastic, fantastic story. A wonderful mixture of lyricism, eroticism and imagination.

Thank you very much.

C.G.

The Black Pearl

I like your writing very much. I've been following your site for quite a while now and I would like to know if you are going to continue the saga of the Black Pearl.

K.V.

C. J.'s note: This email came all the way from Finland!


I just finished the Black Pearl Saga, it was great. I've read most of the stories on your site but the Black Pearl was by far the best one. Its stories like that that put you on my bookmark, so keep it up. You've got talent in writing.

BB


Your stories are fantastic. The Black Pearl shows such tremendous imagination and imagery, and the slavery scenes are of the highest quality.

I am glad you including Kalani. It is a sweet story of slavery and got me going.

RJS


The first story of you I read at nakedblades. It was the Black Pearl. And this I enjoyed so much that I decided to read all of your stories. And I wasn't disappointed. All of them have their touch. Nice work, keep it up.

I was moved by Honeyvine.

S.


Thanks in advance - for writing such a great saga (about a dark sistah I could relate to) and for helping me get to the ending!

S.


Say jade: I just read the notorious chapter 7 of your 'black pearl' story, which was a great joy! the reason was quite specifically how you really get into the consciousness of the characters, rather than simply the choreography. i'm not generally a fan of the fantasy genre, but it was a bit of sunshine for a gloomy autumn day. even more so was your bio's choice of words.

I just wanted you to know that this professional writer/editor thinks the world of your powers of expression and want to see more.

M.B.

Box Office

Would love to see some sort of sequel to "Box Office" one day. Great story.

S.S.

Curve

This was most certainly one of the best pieces of fictional work that I've read on the web. It tantalized,teased and drew me in. I was amazed to find out that this story was written in a day. You have an incredible talent. Thank you for sharing with us.

I.


This was a most extrodinary story and I sincerely enjoyed it from first to last.

B.B.


I really enjoyed your story. I can't explain it, but it made sense. It was as if I could place myself in the woman's position. No, I wanted to be in her position. I wanted to be her, with that man. Absolutely amazing, the nuance of him accepting her, all of her, with his mirror of her fantasy. Not sure if that is what you intended, but that is what I gleaned from it. Thank you. As I said, I really enjoyed it.

J.


Damn if I didn't really like this story. I've not heard of Cobalt before, but he/she can now consider him/herself on my "must download" list. I like fun, and this was fun. That might be an odd thing to say about a BDSM story, but it's true.

The story's premise is fairly simple. A man bed's a woman, and the second time they get together, he asks her what her fantasy is. Apparently, she's thought about this quite a bit, because what she tells him is rich in detail, and very erotic. I liked the style, the sex, the fantasy, the BD, everything was interesting and well-told in this story. It was intelligent as well, and the ending was surprising and perfect. Lovely, lovely, lovely.

I was going to read some more, but "Curve" was such a good story, I can't wait to post this.

D.


Greetings and salutations. I really enjoyed your recent story "Curve"...insanely well written in both its evocation of the slave garden as well as the present-tense/future-imperfect sheet dance. If you're amenable, I'd love to repurpose it with all appropriate credits and links in the "Stories I Wish I'd Written" section of my vanity website (URL below). Please let me know, etc.

A.

Dad's Going to KILL Us!!!

Hey great tale! I read the whole thing instead of glassing over the slow parts like a lot of other authors have in their work. I've been working on a femdom series that's posted to Mr Doubles site under Typoman. It's called Dominating Larry. Unfortunately, I don't email authors like I should unless their tales strike me as particularly good like yours. Keep up the great work and thanks for contributing.

Anonymous

The Gorgon's Kiss

This is just a quick note to let you know how very much I enjoyed "The Gorgon's Kiss." The opening paragraphs pulled me in instantly. Liked the setting of ancient Greece; Hippolyte was well portrayed, immediately likeable. I must admit, however, that as soon as I read about the statues in the garden I said, 'uh-oh. Bet I know what's going to happen!'

Imagine my delight when you took the tale that one step further! Brilliant! That closing line is deliciously chilling. l love it!

T.


I must commend you for your writing. Your style is very fluid, almost mesmorizing. The imagery you use is vivid and engrossing while retaining a maturity and depth that does not betray the story. I thought this tail was of the finest quality I have ever read online. Truly, your work stands out from the legions of amateur and painfully inexperienced authors' on the web. I did finish reading the first chapter of "The Gorgon" and thoroughly enjoyed it. Is there or will there be a second?

P.S.


I found your story titled THE GORGON'S KISS while surfing around the other day. I wanted to write you and let you know that it is the most fascinating and most sensual story I have EVER read. I have never even tried to email a story author before but, felt compelled to let you know how much I truly enjoyed your story. Thank you so very much for a wonderful fantasy. I truly felt Lyte's passion and desire while reading, felt her orgasm and then felt her dismay as the story line twisted to stone. My only regret was that the story was not a book!

A.

Honeyvine

I just want to tell you I loved you story. I cried at the end because to me it was one of the best depictions of true love and desire I have ever read.

Please keep up the excellent work. You are truly gifted wtih a special insight into the special type of love you write about.

T.

Kalani's First Ride

I just read the above mentioned story. And because of the doubts you voiced about it I would like to add this comment. It is a very good story, tastefully and full of erotic tension. It is fiction. So why feel queasy about it?

The first story of you I read at nakedblades. It was the Black Pearl. And this I enjoyed so much that I decided to read all of your stories. And I wasn't disappointed. All of them have their touch. Nice work, keep it up.

I was moved by Honeyvine.

S.


Very well written, with an expert turn of phrase and a loving eye for detail, this is a fetishists Rolls Royce of a story. It's hard to find any sort of fault, its so well executed. First rate.

Glad to have read it?: Yes, very.

Read another by the same author?: You'd be silly not to.

H.

The Off Season

The entire story was beautifully written. Images sprung from the pages, emotions poured from the scenes, the excitement filled me with interest and want.

The only bad part was that it made me feel jealous. Damn, I wish I'd written that.

L.M.


I thought this was marvelously written. There was great imagery in every paragraph. A sheer delight in reading. thanks for sharing.

D.

Painted Ponies

I've read other stories you've done, and always enjoyed your writing. This story, "Painted Ponies", reposted a couple months ago, was no exception. Fun, sexy, interesting and different, definitely a different kind of 'pony' tale. Well-written, everything described well, and a cute ending. Thanks for sharing it again.

D.

Paragon vs. Plastica

I enjoyed your stories, especially the superheroine storyline. I'm partial to superheroine erotica, and you've done a fine job. The cover art was very nice as well.

Good luck in your future writing. Keep it up, it's much enjoyed.

D.D.


I found your page and really enjoyed the Team Paragon story. It is one of the best of its genre I have read and I search the web looking for similar stories. Are you going to finish it? I hope so; it is a terrific piece of work. Thanks.

JPG


I'm just writing to congratulate you on another excellent chapter. You do an excellent job of combining character, story and fetish that keeps you being one of my favorite writers on the web.

M.

Prize Pig

I want to thank you for writing such wonderful stories. Your web page is a wonderful way to not only show them off but also share them with everyone. My favorites so far are The Black Pearl series (especialy chapter 15) and the Prize Pig (mostly because I love to laugh at the people trying to capture the medieval era by wearing jeans and a poet shirt, of course I also love to flirt with them while wearing an especialy low cut bodice). Thank you!!!! Keep up the wonderful work.

R.

Quick Flashes

(Amazon Armor)

I always wondered how those things stayed on. Now I know. Very nice piece, I enjoyed it.

J.


I found "Amazon Armor" to be a well-written piece that had me chuckling at the end. Thanks for writing and sharing!

*smiles*

S.


I enjoyed reading your flash story "Amazon Armor" and liked chuckling at the end. Thanks for sharing. I liked "Will Insurance Cover It?"; it prompted me to chuckle. I also enjoyed "Yellow." Thanks for sharing them.

J.R.


(Will Insurance Cover It?)

I must admit, I was wondering where you were going with this one! Actually, I suspect something like this is *very* common. I know I used to write sexually explicit stories when I was a teenager, and I had just about the same level of knowledge as this kid.

Nice story, and a nice moral to the story.

Thanks!

P.I.


(Yellow)

I just finished reading "Yellow". The image it left in my mind prompted me to write. I have to say in spite of it's brief content it has left a strong impression. Personally I would love to be in either role. Although I enjoy light bondage, I would enjoy this, tied or not. I also love your closing line; "Hey, he thinks I'm the one doing him the favor." I am also curious if that story was purely fiction?

W.D.


I'm normally not into stories like this, but somehow you were able to write it in a way that kept my attention and didn't turn me off. I was surprised and pleased as well. Thahks a lot!

K.M.

The Tale of Lassok and Zairbhreena

What can I say... Hmmm..... WOW!!!! AWESOME!!!

Keep up the great work!! I look forward to seeing more..

I have read your other stories and they are good also. One item of note for me is the arabian knights saga, I enjoyed how the princess kept moving from one near disaster to another, just getting saved in a nick of time.

Anonymous


At a friends recommendation, I'm in the midst of reading your work "The Tale of Lassok and Zairbhreena" but before I continue, I had to email you. I find your writing style amazing. It's incredibly professional. Not too common to find someone who's writing is of the caliber. So, I just wanted to give a little word of thanks for letting us archive your works, as well as send some encouragement to keep us the good work.

RDS


I also follow the "Tales of Lassok..." storyline. That is also great stuff. I'm looking forward to future chapters.

B.H.


Finally, allow me to congratulate you on the outstanding work you've done on the "Lassok and Zairbhreena" series! I loved her change into a golden statue, but in the last installment, I can't help but think 'This poor girl's never going to get a break'. *Grinning*

But then that does help raise the tension... :)

PJB

Troika
You've written an excellent and original story, and embedded it so well in the Russian setting. I became so engrossed that midway through I had forgotten I was even reading a story. Thank you, I really enjoyed it.

C.


Thank You for Your wonderful story, Troika !

I was mesmerized !

M.G.

Waterbaby

Thank you for the very lovely story...of late on ASSGM there have been few stories of M/M action but this one has made the wait worth it. I'd love to see any other stories you have and I hope that you write for a long, long time to come!

J. D.


I read "Waterbaby" on nifty.org and LOVED IT. I also write erotic stories and my forte is masturbation and cross-gender fantasy, particularly father/son. I especially liked the added eroticism the children added to the story, even though they weren't involved sexually.

Very good. Got any more?

Anonymous

Various

I want to thank you for writing such wonderful stories. Your web page is a wonderful way to not only show them off but also share them with everyone. My favorites so far are The Black Pearl series (especialy chapter 15) and the Prize Pig (mostly because I love to laugh at the people trying to capture the medieval era by wearing jeans and a poet shirt, of course I also love to flirt with them while wearing an especialy low cut bodice).

Thank you!!!! Keep up the wonderful work.

R.


You are an excellent writer. I wish I had your talent. How goes your next chapters to the Black Pearl, Princess and Superheroine sagas?

A. M. L.

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