"But soft, what light through yonder window breaks,"
This man is Jake, my Granddad's other son.
Ay me! My need for him, it never slakes.
I help him practice; heart already won.
He speaks of love; I sink down low, undo
His pants, and free his cock; pout out my lips,
Draw in my cheeks, make my oral debut.
Though he declaims, he cannot still his hips.
Jake thrusts, I suck while yet his lines are true;
Salt pearls of wisdom gladly lick away,
Nose at his balls; an act I'll never rue,
Strive both control and 'membered words to fray.
Mine eyes on his, melting, eager to please
I help my Jake with Shakespeare from my knees.
| Nickname | Feedback |
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| Chris Hailey | Boy that is an awesomely hot sonnet. Gotta love the higher arts! Thanks! |
| Thanks so much! You know you inspired me here, both in story and style. It means a lot to me that you like it. --Little Darling |
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| Pixie | The idea is as great as the wording, I can really well imagine the scenario. And, not at least, you are drawing a world of love, without malice and suspicion, a world where I would like to live, no matter if I was the uncle or his "Little Darling." |
| I'm so glad. It does feel like a lovely world and place to be in, doesn't it? Maybe I should write one about learning foreign tongues next time.* *German perhaps? (Great translations!)* --Little Darling |
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| angler | Very ,very clever, well done. Sonnet form is very disciplined, unlike the readers/writers on this post. |
| Thanks angler, I had fun writing this. Thanks to Chris for helping me clean up the format (I was a syllable out in one place, and wording could be tweaked somewhere else). Not sure why, but I find it loads easier to write than a story proper, even though I know those tend to be more popular with the readers. Merry Christmas! --Little Darling |
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| Chris Hailey | My pleasure, Little Darling! Thank you so much for contributing to this site! |
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