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By Chris Hailey
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Copyright 2018
Story codes: DD/lg, spanking
Summary: Annie wants to color, but her Daddy wants to do other things.
"But Daaaaddyyyy! I wanna color!"
"Annie, what did I say about being bratty?"
"You told me you think it's cute when I'm bratty."
"Um, no, that's not..."
"Yes it is! You always say that, Daddy! You think everything I do is cute!"
"Maybe, but in this case, what I told you is that girls who are bratty need to be punished."
"Nuh-uh, you never told me that, Daddy."
"Yes I did. Now come and lay over Daddy's lap so that I can spank you for being bratty."
"You're gonna spank me? Nooooo! I wanna color!!!"
"You should've thought of that before you were naughty. Now lay down on my lap."
"M'kay, Daddy."
"Lift your skirt."
"Don't wanna."
"Annie..."
"Fine!"
"Drop your panties."
"Daddddy! I like my panties! You can spank me when I have them on!"
"Annie, the longer it takes for you to learn to do as your told, the harder the spanking is going to be."
"Okay Daddy, I'll be good."
"I know you will, you're my good girl."
"I am, Daddy! But... I'm still gonna color!"
"That's okay, you can color while I spank you, if you want."
"Thank you, Da... Owwwieee! Not so hard, Daddy, I'm trying to stay in the lines! Oooouch!"
"I have to spank you hard. You need to learn to do what your Daddy tells you, without talking back."
"I think you think--oww!--that I'm cute when I talk back!"
"You're sure cute when your bottom is red. Now get up on the bed on your hands and knees."
"But Dadddddy! I wannna color!"
"Annie, you still haven't learned, have you?"
"Owwww! Daddy, that huuuuurts!"
"On your hands and knees, now!"
"Okay Daddy. I'll be a good girl, I promise. See how good I am?"
"You're a very good girl. Good girls let their daddies do whatever they want."
"You can do whatever you want, Daddy. But..... Daddy?"
"Yes, babygirl?"
"While you do it, I'm gonna color!"
"That's okay, little one. Oh my god Annie, you're so tight!"
"Not so hard, Daddy! I'm trying to stay inside the lines!"
"Fuck that, little bitch, you're Daddy's slut and you'll take whatever Daddy wants to give you."
"Daddddddy, slow down! It's too hard for me to color! Oh, oh Daddy! Fuck me!"
"Daddy's gonna cum, Anniewhore. Take Daddy's cum!"
"Oh yes Daddy oh please! Cum inside me, pleeeeeease!"
"Ugghhh!"
"I love you, Daddy!"
"I love you, babygirl."
"And look, Daddy! I never once colored outside the lines, the whole time!"
Nickname | Date | Feedback |
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Grog | 08/06/2021 | This is an amazing piece of writing. An entire story inside 500 words and it really has almost everything in it as well.
A neat little exercise in writing within limits and well executed. Thanks again for a real fun story |
I'm so glad you got what I was trying to do, and found it fun. Most people hate this kind of shit. ~Chris |
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