Whew... I mean, 'Pee-ew!' What a shitty series!

I've just finished and uploaded the last planned chapter of The Brown Spots, and I wanted to reflect on the series and where it may go in the future.

First, let me thank you for reading the series! I hope you've found some things you've enjoyed along the way. I really write these stories for myself, but I feel humbled and excited when readers let me know that they liked and got off to what I created. Please feel free to contact me with the form at the bottom of any page on my web site and let me know what you think about the series and any scenes you think should be included in future installments.

When I first started writing the series, I had planned out about 25 chapters and some character developments I thought made sense. Pretty quickly, the characters grew up and had a mind of their own, and I found that I wrote instead what felt natural for the women involved. Some characters I'd expected to introduce were abandoned, some scenes and scenarios left for another day, if at all. I didn't want to force the women along, and if I just 'let them grow' from each experience, the next chapter became clear as the last was being written.

I feel this is a good point to pause the series and get some space from it. I have a lot more of the women's lives to tell about, but I want to put time into other underway series, such as The Naturals and My Jewish Princess, and I would like to get the series Shipwrecked up and going. I also have some stories in mind for the I Never Saw Her Again series.

The Brown Spots isn't done, though, and I expect to return to it at some point in 2014. Megan and Chloe especially have a lot of things to try together, and I want you to read all about them. I'll likely break the Channa-Urma plot line out and house it in a non-scat series, reusing their innocent scenes from TBS and building around that to create a stand-alone series that non-scat readers might enjoy This is now done and the series is called Tender Box . Future TBS chapters won't include that story set, though it may reference events you can read about in detail there as needed. That's not to say that Channa won't participate with her mom and Megan in future TBS scenes, but her role will diminish as she becomes closer to Urma and develops a blossoming relationship with the teen.

I'm sure some of you are pissed that Channa and Urma haven't finally gone all the way, with teen juices coating the girls' lips and tongues. Believe me, I want to see that too, and that withheld scene is part of the impetus for breaking off the plot line and giving it a proper treatment. Urma's not a person who will be ready for scat any time soon, if at all, and I see a fun narrative being built about Urma and Channa having a series of firsts together that could become a 20+ chapter treatment. We'll see. UPDATE - Channa and Urma now have their own series, Tender Box

I felt like the final scene, the bulk of Chapter 27, had to be a payoff for the merging lines of the three main characters. Megan's arc from sexual lesbian to panty-pooping fetishist felt complete by finally having the experience with a second person, and the added thrill of it being Chloe's teen daughter made it extra special.

Chloe's arc from savior of Megan through incest and enjoying panty-pooping really wrapped up nicely in chapters 26 and 27. Chapter 26 had a bit of power play that turned around the earlier rescue scene, and chapter 27 completed the other thread, Chloe sharing her daughter with her girlfriend in such a dirty way.

Channa's arc is perhaps the most incomplete, given where things are with Urma, but her panty-pooping arc feels pretty solid, from her initial shock, revulsion and confusion through her acceptance and exploration with her mother's girlfriend. Read more about Channa and Urma in their spin-off series, Tender Box

There are also a couple of foreshadowing moments in Part 1 that suggest scenes in the future. Who was the redhead who shit and masturbated with Megan in the park bathroom? Will Carla, Megan's previous lover, ever make an appearance? What about the girls who heard Channa masturbating at school? Will the copilot who helped Chloe with her in-flight pooping accident be located? What about Jess, or Howard? The questions are in the air, and when I return to the series, you may find answers to them.

If you like this series, please let me know, and check out The Naturals, which is a strongly scat-centered series featuring MF / Mf(mid-late teen) scat sex. Who knows, Megan and Chloe might even make an appearance on The Scat Guru, the video sharing website from The Naturals series.

Thanks for reading, and I look forward to returning to The Brown Spots in the future.

Megan, Chloe, Channa, Urma: I love you all and will miss you until it is time to return.