Semper Fi - Chapter Index

Series Launched: August 31, 2015
Latest Chapter Added: September 3, 2015
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In the late years of a global war, a Marine officer named Hitch who had wearied of fighting and chosen to live alone for five years meets a small family who change his life. Through the love of a young woman in her middle teens, Hitch finds old emotions he thought he'd lost, and is drawn to rejoin the world he thought he'd left behind. Note: This story contains acts of violence (NOT rape or NC content, but battle and hunting), as well as descriptions of mental illness.

Comments on Semper Fi:

Author	Date	Comment	Chase's Response
Alan	25 February 2019	I was never in combat in the time I was in the military, but it gave me some insight into the stress on those that were. This is a wonderful reflection of what those who fight must face. Thank you. (rating: 10)	Thank you so much, Alan! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and got something significant out of it beyond just the erotic scenes!
neicesRMYpassion	19 July 2018	I took a long time to read this story, there were times when I could not complete a whole chapter at one sitting. The imagery you used to describe war is very hard to read; for me anyway; I served for 22 yrs and in 3 different combat zones during that time and have all the glitzy bits of trash metal handed out by mealy mouthed politicians and their politicised dogs,(my commanders),BUT; the place you describe in the story was very nearly image for image what I have imagined and now clearly strive for myself to be my little utopia. My wife would like to thank you for giving me a means to to explain why my brain is not working right sometimes. I find it difficult to convey to her the scenes playing in my head when I have nightmares and how some social scenes cause me to react with stressful violence and then withdraw from everybody; when I showed her this story and she read cover to cover she asked if it was real and I said mostly the same. The story helped her understand me a little bit. So thankyou for that.	Thank you so, so much, neicesRMYpassion. This is one of the most heartfelt and moving messages I've ever received. What you go through and have been through in reality, and what Hitch went through in fiction, is heartbreaking not something I'd wish on anyone. I'm humbled to know that the story struck home, in good and bad ways, but especially that Hitch and Kieu-Linh offered you the ability to at least open a door to dark and vulnerable places and have a chance to give someone who cares about you a peek inside. That has to be very difficult, but I hope it's, in some positive manner, cathartic. Many, many thanks for sharing with me. I've been thinking about your message all day, and it really does make it hit home that what I write can have an impact on people beyond the mere prurience.
Anonymous	18 July 2018	I really enjoyed Semper Fi. A sequel would be great.	Thank you! I definitely do want to write this in the near future, but I'm still working out the plot at this point. I hope it can live up to the original!
Anonymous	1 June 2018	WOW what a great story I really enjoyed reading it and love all the sex in it	Thank you so much!
Anonymous	28 May 2018	enjoyed the action (rating: 9)	Many thanks!
Orblover	6 May 2018	Very well done story, thank you! BTW - nice teaser!	Thanks so much, Orb!
Anonymous	5 May 2018	Very impressed with this tale. I hope you come back to writing some more set in this world/history.	Thanks, Anon! I may return to this world at some point. I have a prequel in mind, and some ideas for a sequel, but not soon, I think. Thanks for reading!
Anonymous	23 April 2018	Really liked semper fit read 3 times	Thank you!
Anonymous	21 February 2018	As a war veteran from Vietnam, I thoroughly enjoyed your story and will look forward to more of your work.	Thank you so much! I hoped the story would not just be erotic, but also an honest look at what it's like to live past the combat. Thanks for reading!
Scott	26 December 2017	I've been reading your works for the last several weeks and enjoy these romantic stories with sex. Please keep up the good work. (rating: 9)	Thank you, Scott! The one I'm working on currently with that theme is Ahead of the Curve. I just put up chapter 24 yesterday and should have another chapter or two up in the next few days.
Anonymous	7 December 2017	Second time I've read this. Loved it just as much as the first time. Are you going to write a sequel to this??	Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed a second read of the story. It's still probably the story I'm most proud to have written, so it means a lot that it has been worth another read through. As to a sequel: Probably not, at least not soon. I've thought about what story I might tell, and I'm not really struck by anything I think would make it worth reopening things. I like where the characters left off, the state of their lives, and I'd hate to break open that peaceful moment to bring them back to a rough world again. It took a lot of planning and rewriting to ensure the story had consistency and didn't leave any of the major plot pieces hanging, and while The War is still somewhat up in the air, I think it was largely made clear that the stalemate conditions weren't likely to change in the near future. The one general concept I think might be worth a sequel would be set in the future a good fifteen or twenty years, probably surrounding Juliana-Ly and maybe Willow and Jimmy. Hitch would be too old to be a lead character, most likely, and I don't expect that he or Kieu-Linh would be doing enough beyond the cabin to be the main protagonists in an action tale. So, at this point, I don't expect to follow up Semper Fi for a while. I'm not ruling it out completely. It could happen that an idea pops into my head and I just have to write it, but for now, I have other writing priorities to attend to.
RS	14 November 2017	Back rereading Semper Fi, as a Marine Combat Veteran I am close to this story lots of emotion but I have loved this on since you first published this one.	Thank you, RS! Of all my stories, I think Semper Fi is the one which best represents the sort of tale I can tell best. There's enough good sex scenes to keep it a fap story, but the characters and plot are thick enough to make it something much more. I'm definitely proud of Semper Fi, and I'm especially happy to hear from folks who have 'been there' who enjoy this story.
Anonymous	7 November 2017	I'm not normally a fan of post-apocalypse type stories, but this one held my interest from beginning to end. Well written, sensitive at times, dark at others, and always engaging. Thank you for sharing it.	Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it despite the lack of initial interest in the context!
Anonymous	6 November 2017	Excellent story so far! Good enough for publication, although I’m thinking that later chapters my not be appropriate for general readers. I am enjoying it and look forward to the rest of the story.	Thanks so much! I hope you enjoy the way the story unfolds. It is one of my favorite that I've written to date.
tyri	26 October 2017	Congratulations on your narrative -- completely unbelievable, but just plausible enough to pass muster once you have just overcome a smidgen of disbelief -- with one exception: Viagra. Still available in a time where the consumer society has pretty much collapsed? Where you build your own shelter? Where you produce your own food? I think I would have been less shocked if whosis had found some rhinoceros horn to barter against a dozen eggs, or at least located an oyster bed (kind of difficult in tha Appalachians, though!) The Viagra is a minor detail, though. I am an absolute fan of stories that are actual stories about plausible things happening, rather than clinical descriptions of what fits where and dimensions that beggar belief, where glamorous Hollywood roles are available for the price of a roll in the hay of a casting couch, nobody has an ounce of fat, and all climaxes are simultaneous. In French, a novel is called un roman, with an obvious relationship to romanticism, most often describing one or more relationships that are fraught with difficulties. The story is supposed to describe what obstacles arise, and what the protagonists do to overcome them -- successfully or not. with a happy ending or not. So far, you score close to tops, so please continue....	Thanks, Tyri! I appreciate the feedback, and I don't disagree that the Viagra piece is a convenience in the telling. However, I think it is plausible enough, though, especially in a broader context than the narrator explains while telling the story. Since we're mostly watching over Hitch's shoulder, we see almost nothing of what is going on in the rest of the world (beyond the prologue, anyway.) The Northeast US, for instance, may have recovered quickly throughout the war since it had both an influx of immigrants from the southern states to provide labor, and had less 'home turf' to defend with the 'border' states taking the brunt of all impacts. Plus, we only get 'headlines' to inform the reader about the rest of the world. It is plausible that, despite the widespread outbreak of hostilities, by the time Hitch's story takes place, much of the world has returned to something resembling normal. As such, it isn't really too much of a stretch to believe that pharmaceuticals are still being produced and sold and that some of them will have made their way into the barter-heavy outskirts of civilization, such as the mountains where Hitch and the others live. Perhaps Boston and New York and Philadelphia are thriving by that point, maybe the UK and France and Germany as well, and certainly pills which are in demand would have been among the first to be back in production and widespread in availability in those places. Anyway, that's why that bit felt reasonably plausible enough to include. It's one of the benefits of having an non-omnipotent or otherwise imperfect narrator telling the story: I don't have to explain every single detail of the world in order to introduce pieces from 'out there' as needed. And I absolutely agree with you about plausibility in stories. It's why I so carefully go into the inner workings of emotions and context and 'reasons' and don't just jump right into the sex scenes. I like to know why my characters are motivated to do what they do. I've written a few short stories and a couple of series where I do less of that, but by far the most satisfying works I've produced are the ones which I've given careful explanations for actions, and those are the stories I'm most proud of publishing. I'd probably put Semper Fi at the top of my list, honestly. It's not perfect, no, but I love the characters, the dialog, and the plot and thought it turned out to be a very robust, sincere version of the story I had in my head when I first conceived it.
Tex	10 May 2017	What an enjoyable read. Storyline was well developed as were the characters. Your cynicism of the war support systems in the west fits my belief about the current situation in the USA. The soldiers are nothing but pawns and consumers of expensive weapons. Designed, manufactured and used for the sole benefit of the industrial military companies. Again a very enjoyable read.	Thank you, Tex! Unfortunately, I think you are spot on in many ways. Whatever one feels about the timing and necessity of recent wars, the way our soldiers are utilized is distressing. I doubt this will change any time soon. Glad you enjoyed SF!
Anonymous	15 February 2017	Amazing piece of writing.....who does your editing?	Thank you! I do all of my own editing, though I do have a couple of readers who notify me of random typos or grammar errors.
Jerry	31 December 2016	Really good story. Thank you Have not read any of your other stories as yet. I will when they are done. Have been disappointed too many times when authors don't finish their works and leave me stranded.	Thanks for the compliments! I think Semper Fi is my best story to date, one I really enjoyed writing and I am proud of how it turned out. Not an easy story to write, in many ways, but worth it, I hope. I have several series which are open-ended, such as Shipwrecked and Flower Petals, so don't expect those to draw to specific end points. Others, such as Groundhog Nights and What the Night Whispers, do end and are complete at this time. The series Run is approaching a conclusion as well, but I have to finish the last 8-10 chapters or so first (should be over the next couple of months if things go as planned.) I don't know whether the subjects in those stories are of interest to you, but if so, you might enjoy them, as well. Very different than Semper Fi, but I am proud of them.
Anonymous	25 June 2016	I loved it. As someone who suffers from combat related PTSD, I found your writing about PTSD to give exposure... without turning dark, And I enjoyed that. The setting was awesome... post-apocalyptic without the zombies! Score!	Thank you so much! I really hope I've done all aspects of the story justice, and I'm glad you found it enjoyable! I definitely love writing in post-a scenarios, and I expect I'll write more of those in the future.
Anonymous	12 June 2016	Would appreciate it if you removed the "SEMPER FI"...from your Porn site... Know what I mean...???	I really don't.
Rory	10 June 2016	This is my second read of this masterful story and truly appreciate the way you have handle all of the sensitive issue involved here. And yes additional stories or even chapters checking on on these folks occasional would be deeply appreciated. Semper Fi Mac!	Thank you so much, Rory! I'm really proud of Semper Fi, I thought it turned out pretty well based on my early ideas and concepts. I hope to do something like it again one day. And I do hope to do the backstory at some point, as well. Who knows, maybe I will 'check in' with Hitch and the others for some updates one day.
Jim	15 March 2016	Excellent story. Love your writing, and hope you do the back story	Thanks, Jim! I hope to do just that one day.
abbe	29 February 2016	Thank you Sir, For another nice story, I read it in 2 sittings and that I think is a good mark on how well I appreciated it. I also value how you are being able to vary background, settings, different types of relations, and pleasures. Finally I much look forward to be reading the conclution of Shipwrecked.	Very much appreciated, abbe. Glad you enjoyed the story!
Duke	1 January 2016	Thank you for a great story. Semper Fi was sooo well written. I especially liked being able to read the story all at once with out having to wait for various chapters to be posted (not a complaint just an observation). All of you writers are so kind to post for our free entertainment.	Thanks and glad you enjoyed it, Duke! It is my pleasure to write for others to enjoy. I wish I had more time for it.
William	21 November 2015	A very in-depth look at what some of our brothers-in-arms have gone thru during times of combat. I wish to thank you for a very well written story and even though it brought tears to my eyes several times I enjoyed it very much.	Many thanks, William!
Chuckles6977	22 September 2015	I haven't read any stories yet, but finished reading your into to Semper Fi. Even here your literary talent shows and I am greatly pleased to see you honoring our men and women in the military and addressing the "terrible lack of support" for them. In addition to looking forward to reading your work, I am honored to know that you have great morals in the real world that we live in.	Thanks, Chuckles! Regardless of how I feel about where they are sent or the wars they are sent to fight, there is no doubt about the sacrifice and honor our soldiers and sailors and airmen and Marines have. It was a pleasure to try to treat them right with this story.
sales 01	21 September 2015	Best of your stories yet! Don't get me wrong, I love all your work, but this one was head and shoulders above the rest. Story was outstanding, didn't see anything unbelievable in your military descriptions, everything flowed and I read it a lot quicker than you wrote it, which I understand you cranked out in record time. Thanks again, we appreciate your writing!	So glad you enjoyed it and many thanks!
Gunny	16 September 2015	Thank you for a well written story. I am retired from the Marines, three tours in Viet Nam. My time was spent in the air, helicopter gunner and latter as a crew chief, UH-34 and CH-46. You have come very close to the black part of the mind. And the uncaring of the people in high power. I have in the past 5 years grown to distrust the people in DC more than ever before in my life. The wedge that has been driven between our people is some thing I wish had never happened. Thank you again	Many, many thanks, Gunny! I tried to balance the various complex emotions and thoughts of Hitch and the others, and I hope I did it some justice! I certainly enjoyed writing this story and am fairly pleased with how it turned out. Thanks for sharing the compliments and your story!
Anonymous	13 September 2015	I really enjoyed "Semper Fi" and am enjoying "What The Night Whispers". I think your writing and plots are getting better and better but at the same time less dirty. As a porn lover this makes me sad but as a reader who thinks you should start writing non-porn novels and hopefully make some money from them, it makes me happy. From a fapability standpoint, "Run", "Groundhog Nights" and "The Naturals" are my favs. Thanks for the amazing amount of enjoyable work.	Thank you, Anon! I definitely feel that I've gotten better over the months, I hope this comes through in what you read. It's true that Semper Fi certainly is 'less dirty,' but I have added chapter 18 to Groundhog Nights which is very dirty, especially for that series, plus a fairly recent addition to The Naturals which is exceptionally dirty. So, I will still write dirty scenes and stories, but it is true that my new stories will take on a generally less-dirty tone than some others.
Anonymous	10 September 2015	When is Semper Fi...the continuing stories coming out? Semper Fi is a great story that I thoroughly enjoyed; However, you left enough loose ends where a "part 2" could easily come into existence. Items like: the war; the growing families; the Captain in Denver who was kind to our hero and heroine; the buried gold that was left behind on the return to the cabin;etc. etc.	Thank you, Anon! That's a tall order, honestly. I'm pretty happy with how the story wrapped up all the major plot points that I felt needed resolution. The War is something that is much, much bigger than what we see with the main characters, and would take a lot of effort to fully explain and resolve in a story. I personally like stories which don't attempt to sum up every end point, leaving the characters in a state of perpetual existence, on the cusp of new events, letting the reader consider what ifs. I doubt I'll return to do a full work up on the threads you describe, but I may tell a backstory/prequel which was teased and left unexplained in this story.
Big Jake	5 September 2015	Chase great new story. Loved it!	Thank you, Big Jake!
Anonymous	4 September 2015	Great story. thanks for writing and sharing	Thank you!
Anonymous	4 September 2015	Truly wonderful story. Kept me up burning the midnight oil more than once.	Many thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
Anonymous	3 September 2015	Freakin great story. If you find the time, finish the story of The War. Really curious on how it will end. Stalemate seems anti-climactic.	Thank you! I appreciate wanting to know where The War goes, but I kind of liked leaving that aspect unresolved in the narrative. I wanted the scene in the Epilogue to end the story, and at that point in time (based on the backstory I have have for the chronology), the stalemate continued. Perhaps I could be convinced one day to do a short round up of The War, but I probably won't for some time.
Paul	2 September 2015	Hey Chase just read the new story! For the first release of chapters. AWESOME!!! I only saw one tiny misspelling but only a grammar nazi will scream about it! LOL It reminds me of my cousin when he came back from Vietnam. He turned into a recluse in the hills and mountains too! Took him a few years and a few visits from some people for him to come down. I can't wait for the net release of chapters! Keep up the great work! And please continue on with the other stories!!! Need to finish those up! Sitting on a knife edge here waiting for the older story releases!!	Thanks, Paul! I just published the last chapters of the series, I hope you enjoy them! Now that this one is complete, I'll go back to the other series as I have time, definitely more to tell in Shipwrecked, Flower Petals, Run, and Groundhog Nights!