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* "Imagine My Surprise" by Morgan Preece (office romance)
10, 8, 8
"Imagine My Surprise" by Morgan Preece (zanna@whoever.com). The boss attends the office Christmas party and meets an employee he didn't know he had. She's only 18 (to his 55), but he's immediately attracted to her. The only thing wrong with this story is that it's not complete. Right now it's just flirtation leading up to what I expect to be hot sex. If it lives up to my expectations, when it's finished this will be a good one. Ratings for "Imagine My Surprise" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 8 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 8 |