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"Lunch Date" by JB (pussy shaving). Owl: 10, 10, 10 "Lunch Date" by JB (jms5b@virginia.edu). Guest review by Watchful Owl. As I came to the end of "Lunch Date", I felt a silly grin half-slipping across my features. This is a good read, entirely focused on a woman who decides to shave her vagina for her husband's sake. The author does an excellent job of what he's trying to do. The plot is not deep, and it doesn't have to be. No names are given; they don't have to be. This is a "charcoal sketch" of a story: no detail is given except to the focus, yet beautiful in its simplicity. Ratings for "Lunch Date" Venus (Plot and character) 10 Athena (Technical Quality) 10 Watchful Owl (Appeal to reviewer) 10