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* "Shower Buddies" by Stone Wolf
(humorous sexual escapades) 10, 10, 10
* "Shower Buddies" by Stone Wolf (an582016@anon.penet.fi). I normally don't like to review multi-chapter stories until all the parts have been posted. Sometimes the authors don't even bother to finish the stories, and then my readers will feel cheated. In addition, a story that begins well may end badly, or vice versa. I decided to make an exception with this story. Even though only two chapters have been posted and even though the author says that no actual sexual contact will occur until "at least chapter 3," I think you'll want to know about this one. The basic premise of this story is that there has been a fire in the women's dorm and the displaced coeds have with little forewarning been relocated into one of the men's dorm. Our protagonist first notices this when he is in a naked, semi-comatose, early-morning stupor in the shower, asking to borrow shampoo from the person in the adjacent stall. His body language sort of embarrasses him as he tries to be polite and recover from his faux pas when he discovers that the guy he is talking to is an attractive girl. This story reminds me of an X-rated script for a high quality sitcom. For example, I can imagine this being a plot for "Friends" or "The Single Guy." The story is extremely well written; the characters are refreshingly wholesome; and the story is redolent of realistic details of college life - like showers that make funny noises and guys that don't use fabric softener for their towels. I am eagerly looking forward to more of this story. Ratings for "Shower Buddies" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |