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* "My Wedding" by EazinAlong (wedding orgy) 10, 10, 10
* "My Wedding" by EazinAlong (The artist formerly known as WouldBeBad) (EazinAlong @aol.com). The official wedding took place in the bride's parents' church, with a wedding march, candles, flowers, and lots of guests. In her vows she promised to obey Michael. To most of the people present, this was just a phrase in the traditional wedding vows. A select few who were invited to a separate ceremony later that day knew more specifically what that vow meant. The bride was a successful stoke broker, and she wanted no more stressful responsibility in her private life. She had told Michael that she would give herself to him in the privacy of their home if he would assume all the responsibility. He could have her as a sex slave, if that meant she didn't have to make decisions. This sounded like a bargain to Michael; and so now she stood naked except for a garter belt and a few sensual accouterments in front of a minister and an audience of 20 people - eager but apprehensive about what would happen next. This is not your ordinary wedding ceremony. I won't go into detail here. Use your imagination or read the story. It's very well written. Ratings for "My Wedding" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |