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"As I Bent over the Pool Table" by Adult Video (anal sex). Ivan: 8, 3, 4
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"As I Bent over the Pool Table" by Adult Video (webmaster@sex.net)
Guest reviewed by Poison Ivan (poisoniv1@hotmail.com).

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Some lady gets butt-fucked by some guy with ten-inch cock. The sex
starts midway through the first sentence and doesn't end until the
final period. There is no discernible plot. But we do learn one thing
about the female character: she loves getting it in the ass.

The sex was exciting for a while, but then it got boring. Have you
ever masturbated to a good story, but when you reached the end you
hadn't quite reached an orgasm? "As I Bent over the Pool Table" might
be a good story to push a teetering reader over the edge. But if you
aren't already teetering, I'd suggest you skip this one.

Ratings for "As I Bent over the Pool Table"
Athena (technical quality): 8
Venus (plot & character): 3
Ivan (appeal to reviewer): 4