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"He Loved Her" by BlueLady16 (passionate poem) 10, 10, 10
"He Loved Her" by BlueLady16 (BlueLady16@aol.com) --- Bluelady is at it again. This poem will grab your attention and make you feel what's happening - even though you won't know what's really happening until she decides to tell you at the very end of the poem. Before you read the poem, use your global replace to change "except" to "accept," and you won't even be distracted. Ratings for "He Loved Her" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |