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"Schoolboy Sissy Slut" by Mr Pornwriter (mindless sex) 10, 5, 1
"Schoolboy Sissy Slut" by Mr Pornwriter (mrpornwriter@hotmail.com). I had politely skipped over this story in the postings every time I saw it in recent weeks. Then I received this message in my email: "Attached is a zipped copy of my first story "Schoolboy Sissy Slut", which I submit for review.... Hope you like it." To quote my husband's favorite movie star: "Not hardly, pilgrim." This is a story about a kid who goes to a new school, where he is mistreated and exploited by just about everyone. At the end, we find this comment: "By the time the whole of the first year had their turn David was openly sobbing. After the second year students finished with him, the cross-dressed teenager was wailing with tears. Then came his own year, the third year. They seemed to relish the opportunity to spank a naughty schoolgirl, especially the girls. They made sure their blows really counted and soon David was screaming for them to stop." The question that springs to mind is, "Who gives a shit?" Actually, this story answers that question: (humil, nc, ttt/t, spank, forced tv/tg, f/t, fem-dom, ws, scat, M/t, bi-male, F/t, inc, etc...) This story sucks. In fact, it sucks donkeys. No, it sucks dinosaurs. No, it sucks blue whales. That's it - blue whales - the biggest creatures ever to live on the face of the earth - This story sucks blue whales. Ratings for "Schoolboy Sissy Slut" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 5 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 1 |