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"Douglas and Penelope" by Gordie D (romance) 10, 10, 10
"Douglas and Penelope" by Gordie D (GordonD103@aol.com). --- Doug and Penny have a chaste courtship, fall in love, get married, and have a very nice wedding night. That's about it, except that a few details add a lot of spice. As Doug said afterwards: "That was really unbelievable. I hope she's not expecting it to be like this every night, though . . ." Doug and Penny take turns telling the story, and so we get independent verification of what each one knows and feels about the various events. This was a very good approach to a very good story. Ratings for "Douglas and Penelope" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |