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"Riding Double" by Titmouse (rape) 8, 10, 9
"Riding Double" by Titmouse. Guest review by Nick (e-mail Nick@cassandra.demon.co.uk). I've just noticed the story coding, and I think its wrong. It indicates this is a "teen" sex story, but this is not apparent from anything within the story itself. The writer would have done better to code it as rape. This may be a little extreme, but if you are after a consensual romantic love story, this isn't it. Basically the plot is this: Large breasted girl is held down by two guys and forced to have sex with both of them. By the end, she has had all significant orifices filled. Although she says no to start with, she doesn't really mean it, and has a thoroughly good time. I don't think I've given too much away! It is pure stroke and should make those who like mild nc sex happy enough. What more can I say? Having just had my bollocks chewed for some comments on rape I made in the newsgroup, I'd like to add that this is a review for the reader. I see my role as offering a guide for people to read what turns them on. I am not making any moral judgments here - I'll do that in the ng (if at all). My own ratings for this are: Technique 6 (the story didn't really generate much atmosphere - it was really little more than a description of what went on). Plot & Character 4 ( well this is "stroke" - there isn't supposed to be much of either - and there isn't) Appeal to me 7. Normalising for Celeste and applying a "stroke" correction for the "Venus" mark: Ratings for "Riding Double" Athena (Technique) - 8 Venus (Plot/Stroke) - 10 Appeal (to me) - 9 |