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"Party Time" by Artie (artie@netgate.net) 10, 10, 10
"Party Time" by Artie (artie@netgate.net). Artie does not write complex stories - just simple stories that make sex sound like a lot of fun. Artie sometimes makes simplistic assumptions. For example, if two sexy mothers and a surrogate father decided to have a spontaneous threesome in one of those tunnels in a kiddyland while they are supposed to be watching the children, chances are much greater that they would be arrested for indecent exposure or contributing to the delinquency of the minors thereabouts than that they would have a delightful little tryst, even if one of the threesome is a lactating mother who simply has to do something to alleviate her pain. But the story certainly is fun, and there's no harm in fantasy. In fact, the Chicago Cubs have built a baseball empire on the foundation of their fans' relatively non-sexual fantasies; and so what harm can there be in believing that three red-blooded Americans can get it on in a play facility, while the twelve children for whom they are responsible somehow refrain from doing any serious harm for the duration? Ratings for "Party Time" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |