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"Scenery" by Nick (voyeurism) 10, 10, 10
"Scenery" by Nick (nick@cassandra.demon.co.uk). This is sort of a companion piece to go along with LeAnna's "Ten," which I reviewed in CR 286. Nick and LeAnna are sitting together in some sort of a park, admiring the scenery. The scenery consists of nubile women, upon whom the venturesome aficionados have been conferring ratings on a scale of 1-10, in addition to generating oral reviews of the most noteworthy characteristics of these invariably buxom young ladies. It's obviously improper to treat people like objects in this way, but I have to admit that I myself do this too. Occasionally I work out in a fitness center, and the routine there can become boring. To boost my spirits, I keep an internal record of alpha, beta, and gamma males and females. I visually sweep the room from left to right. The first guy that looks reasonably decent becomes my alpha male. He stays in that position until I come upon a better specimen, whereupon the alpha male drops to beta position. And so forth. I take into consideration not only obvious physical characteristics, but also their personalities and friskiness in the sack. Since I {usually} have no direct experience of either of these factors, I give free rein to my fantasies. On alternate days (or when there are not enough men to establish a hierarchy) I do females instead. Sometimes I even have an alpha couple. This may sound silly, but it sure makes the time pass quickly. It sure beats reciting Shakespeare to myself on those days when I forget my rosary beeds! Anyway, these two people do it more actively and overtly than I do. They even become part of the scenery. Omigod - maybe I'm someone else's alpha female.... Ratings for "Scenery" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |