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"My New Stepsister" by fred-fan (incest) 10, 9, 10
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"My New Stepsister" by fred-fan (fred-fan@juno.com). Guest review by Sven the
Elder (Sven@brass-neck.demon.co.uk).
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Perhaps this is a recent male / female fantasy; it is an adolescent
exploration I missed out on. I was a lot older than my two kid sisters and so
never had the benefit, or otherwise, of learning adulthood through shared
experience. Would they have let me - I knoweth not. The experience of the
writer and his 'New Stepsister', Linda, may not be typical but are delightful
to read. The hesitating touching and Doctor's and Nurses games between the
growing children, who are closed matched in age, has that almost indefinable
ring of truth. Gentle sibling love. Although told before, by others in
different ways, this version is a nice story.

Ratings for "My New Stepsister"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 9
Sven (appeal to reviewer): 10