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*"Fruit of the Vine" by Wollstonecraft (rough first time sex)
9.5, 9.5, 9.5
* "Fruit of the Vine" by Wollstonecraft (an285729@anon.penet.fi). The girl has been drinking, and her boyfriend has been nice enough to find her a quiet, cool place to lie down. As she feels her jeans being pulled down over her hips, she vaguely thinks she ought to protest; but she can't understand why. The fondling fingers on her body feel so good, especially when they press into the soft globes of her ass, lifting her off the bed, sliding her jeans down her legs. Her torment over her virginity slipping away and her immediate realization that she is probably pregnant become trivial when she is faced with the knowledge that the guy who fucked her was not even her boyfriend, but a total stranger. Things work out; it's just a major change in her way of life. She discovers that there are a lot of guys who love to fuck knocked-up bitches and who pay quite well for the privilege. If she manages things right, she can simply become a whore and maintain this new lifestyle for a long time. The one aspect of the story that I disliked was the fact that the guy who popped the girl's cherry was a black man. This detail was presented with a racially demeaning nuance: not only did the girl get deflowered by a stranger while she was drunk, but to make matters worse the guy was a scruffy black guy. I don't think this racial slur contributed to the story, and I would have liked to have seen it omitted. Ratings for "Fruit of the Vine" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9.5 |