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"Rodney's Education" by Steve Getto (a boy and his sorceress) 8.5, 4.5, 6.0 http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=334193948 "Rodney's Education" by Steve Getto (sorceress@darktower.edu.au). Guest review by jubjub. Story Summary: Boy and a Sorceress. This is an interesting story and it has distinct possibilities. However, as it is written, it isn't anything special. I must admit, though, that the sexual descriptions do get a response. Technically, there are a number of small spelling and grammar errors, but the greatest deduction was for the lack of flow. The sentences seemed, at times, stilted. But, overall, the technical aspects were quite acceptable. Considering that this is Part 1, I won't complain a lot about a lack of plot and character. However, even an opening chapter should set up some character depth and give the reader an idea of how the story will unfold. We know nothing about these characters other than the profession and a vague idea of their age. Worse, there is nothing in this story to suggest that it will unfold as nothing more than a predictable dominatrix story--even with the sorcery. There is considerable sexual description but little actual sex. The scene that ends Part 1 is what gives me the hope that as this series continues, the author can continue with inventive sexual descriptions. I hope that this invention will extend to both the setting and the sexual acts described. If so, this series will definitely be one to keep on eye on. Ratings for "Rodney's Education" Technical: 8.5 Easy to follow sentences but lacks a distinct style Characterization and Plot: 4.5 Reads more like an idea for a story Personal Appeal: 6.0 The writer seems inhibited. A more mysterious style would help.