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"Fishing Trip in the Rockies" by Charles Thain (outdoor sex) 8
"Fishing Trip in the Rockies" by Charles Thain. Guest review by Dave Myers. This author takes a straight-ahead approach to a lavish male fantasy. That doesn't mean there aren't some interesting variations along the way. There are quite erotic moments, and the female characters are less of caricatures than most stories you will read on the newsgroups. Synopsis: A man is camping alone when he runs into three beautiful German women in the mountains. The women can't seem to control themselves and two of them throw their bodies upon him. In a refreshingly different storyline, the third woman is uninterested in the goings-on of the other campers. The author's treatment of her predicament (an ankle injury) is unexpected and adds credibility to the plot. In his fantasyland, the guy is the cavalier hero for treating her injury at a time of crisis, but unfortunately, this development comes off in a very slightly patronizing way. Still, it's HIS fantasy, so I can only argue so much, as this doesn't interfere with the plot or the sex. Also refreshing is the fact that the lucky guy gets his way with both women (sometimes simultaneously, sometimes not), but the author doesn't stray into the trite bisexual possibilities that most stories on the newsgroups exhibit under similar circumstances. Call this a PWOR (pitiful waste of resources) if you want, but I'm thankful. I won't spoil the final twist, even though we're not talking about real suspense here. Charles Thain manages to hold it together nicely and delivers an enjoyable entry. His only previous story (to my knowledge) has been the monolithic "My Weekend In Portland", which was rambling in comparison to this little gem. Rating: 8 |