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"Andrea's Submissive Ass" by Wyvern (bdsm) 9, 7, 5
"Andrea's Submissive Ass" by Wyvern. Guest Review by DG. This story, as you may have already gleaned from the title, isn't for everyone. It's a short, hard-core SM scene between a submissive woman and her master. Oops, I mean her MASTER. The actions that are performed would, in real life, fall somewhere between excruciatingly painful and life-threatening. So is there anything to recommend about a story that describes a degrading, painful act perpetrated on a bound, helpless woman? Well, yes. This story has a straightforward sexual intensity about it that makes a definite impression. If a sexual relationship where one partner has utterly submitted control to the other appeals to you, and you're not easily squicked by anatomically improbable penetration, you will probably find this worth reading. I can't honestly say that I enjoyed it, but I think that many people would, and I think I've said enough about the story so that those people know who they are. Ratings for "Andrea's Submissive Ass" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 7 DG (appeal to reviewer): 5 (For some it will be a lot higher) |