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"Deep Dank" by Cameron Bragg (group sex) 5, 3, 3
"Deep Dank" by Cameron Bragg (cdbragg@ozemail.com.au). Guest review by Pulp Fan. "Deep Dank" purports to be the true story, a la "Penthouse Letters," of a group of three men who hook up with four waitresses from a cafe (or, as the author spells it, cafi), for some hot tub sex. If this story were true, each of these gentlemen should contact Guiness, as they each cum probably close to a dozen times within two or three hours and always remain hard. Ah, the resiliency of youth! The writing style is very stiff, particularly at the beginning, and the author compounds his lack of polish by telling the story in the first person, a difficult tense for a writer to do correctly. On the plus side, there really aren't _that_ many spelling errors; just the occasional missing word and an awkward way of phrasing things. The tale itself is straight male adolescent masturbatory fantasy--the women never speak, are able to literally rip men's pants off in order to get at the throbbing dicks they crave, are hyper-sexed and insatiable, and are not identified by name but, rather, by attribute. "I noticed Bob had disappeared and I looked around to find him with one fist up the Greek girl's arse, and big breasted girl sucking his cock." In addition to these two babes, there's also "unattractive girl" and a virgin "goddess". Oh yeah, and the mother of unattractive girl gets into the mix too, mesmerized by Phil's manliness, when she discovers the hi-jinx going on in the hot tub. I like well-written group sex stories, but this one is so unbelievable, it's probably of interest only to diehard fans of the genre. Ratings for "Deep Dank": Athena (technical quality): 5 Venus (plot & character): 3 Pulp Fan (appeal to reviewer): 3 |