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"Revelations" by Sven the Elder (expiatory menage a trois)
10, 10, 10
"Revelations" by Sven the Elder (sventheelder@hotmail.com). "Christ, Fran, what are you doing?" Sven asks; "I'm trying to be a gentleman, and you're making it very hard." Very hard indeed. Fran has been a widow for about fifteen years, while Sven and Pam have been her close friends. Now Pam has sent Sven over to Fran's house to give her a hand, and Fran seems interested in more than a hand or two birds in her bush. Seduction being inevitable, Sven relaxes and enjoys it. But isn't he being disloyal to the pulchritudinous but proper Pam? Well, no; she's part of the plan. Pam the Prude of the Parish has recently at Fran's invitation been in the sack with Ben of the Baloney Pony with whom she crossed her Rubicon. To make amends to Sven, Pam has offered him to Fran, and now she has come to make sure her atonement has been satisfactory. I guess this beats a simple apology and a month's worth of groveling. This is an old story, but Sven tells it very nicely. Ratings for "Revelations" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |