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"Mandy" by Darkman (Incest, pedophilia and videotape)
8, 8, -
"Mandy" by Darkman (abekl@ibm.net). Guest review by Sandman (sandman@bitsmart.com). Yet another warning that this story falls outside my normal tastes and preferences, and thankfully this time there was no appeal to reviewer as well. I'm sorry, but after "Wendy" if I read another pedo piece that held an appeal to the reviewer I'd be checking myself into the nearest psychiatric hospital. This story is rated on technical quality and plot alone. It will be up to you to decide if any of this appeals to you enough to call up the story. What's a father to do when on a hot summer's day jerking off while watching a porno flick he catches his fourteen-year-old daughter and her friend spying on him through the bedroom window? Ignore it, at least until he finds his daughter has poked a spy hole through the bedroom wall. Then it's time to scheme on how to catch her in the act of spying on him. Of course he does, and this leads to a mutual masturbation scene where the earth, of course, moves for both of them. Fortunately Mandy is very willing to keep this all secret so long as they can have more fun together. With this new relationship established, they move on to watching a porno flick a few days later. "What the hell in for a nickel in for a dime," the author states as the father fingers his daughter to orgasm. There's some voyeuristic fun as the father watches Mandy and her girlfriend get each other off later that evening. The next day they visit a park and the father gets so worked up he has to get some relief. Luckily the public restroom has a glory hole and some strange guy deep throats him for the best blow job he's ever gotten. This is a very long story and it's almost purely 100% sex scene after sex scene. It's fairly safe to say there's not a character in this story the father does not at one point have sex with (the sex with his son is implied by the glory hole incident). There's a threesome with the father, his neighbor, and her daughter; there's another threesome with the father, his wife, and their daughter. There's a scene between the daughter and her friend, there's a scene between the son and the gym instructor. There's a scene... well, you get the idea. Believe it or not, underneath this non-stop sex there's an actual plot in the intrigue around the man's son (who definitely has problems). It appears the son's gym teacher (male) has been taking liberties with the boy (and a dog for a bestiality scene). The father, of course, is incensed by this, and at 2am the father and wife pay a visit to the man. The payback comes by raping the instructor's wife. Well, it starts out as rape, but everyone gets off in THE END. The main technical problems with this story is an inconsistent use of quotation marks around the dialog and the fact that dialog between multiple parties resides inside single paragraphs. But the author does have a breezy writing style that's easy enough to read, even if the subject matter interferes with that for most people. The story tries to have a plot (the man's son being abused by the gym teacher and the vengeance it inspires), but in the context of the inconsistency of the father abusing his own daughter the imperative for vengeance seems almost silly, and the end result (raping the man's wife) merely creates another victim. So this story is held afloat only by the sex. The sheer quantity of the sex and the fact that it's reasonably well written will probably be enough for the people who are into this genre. To conclude, I will insert a personal note here. Just as the father wanted to thrash the man buggering his son, I could not help but note the irony; for I very much hoped Child Protection Services would burst on the scene and thrash the father around for a few hours, then insert him into a transgender/mind-control/misogynistic(*) story where this walking penis would no longer be a threat to his neighbors, his family, or my sensibilities. {Sigh} So much for objectivity. (*) Hatred of women. Bronwen's usage of the word forced me to look it up and I've been wanting to use it ever since. Hey, after three straight pedo reviews, right now I'll take any redeeming quality I can find or create! Sandman's Ratings of "Mandy" Athena (technical quality): 8 -- Needs to handle dialog better. Venus (plot & character): 8 -- Non-stop sex (This space intentionally left blank) |