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"Wendy" by Friar Dave (sex with young girl) 10, 10, 10
"Wendy" by Friar Dave (friar_dave@mhbbs.com). Guest Review by Sandman (sandman@bitsmart.com). Again I must warn you that this story falls outside of my normal personal tastes and preferences. The story contains a very explicit incest scene between a 14-year-old brother and his 12-year-old sister, as well as graphic pedophilia descriptions between the 12-year-old girl and an adult male. Dan (the narrator) is more than thrilled to find the beautiful Marge moving in next door to him and being a normal, red-blooded male tries in vain to win her affections. As is the case with all of Friar Dave's stories the characters are painstakingly developed. Before any one hops into the sack the reader KNOWS these people and when the sex happens it makes sense. Dan is asked by Marge to help assemble a grill for a party she is having later that evening and Dan, still eager to win her affections willingly accepts the task. When Marge has to step out and Dan explores the house to find a cool drink he stumbles on Wendy, Marge's twelve-year-old daughter giving Josh, Marge's fourteen year old son a rather professional blow job. Naturally Dan is turned on by this, but he discreetly plays dumb and returns to his job. Wendy comes out and talks with him a bit later on and he learns that Marge is gay, forever putting her out of his reach. And later that evening Wendy slips away from the dull party to visit Dan where she learns his ex-girlfriend is a porno star and goads Dan into letting her watch one of the tapes. From there the story tenderly and explicitly describes several varied sexual positions. In chapter 10 the story abandons the pedophilia and concentrates on a really interesting sex scene between Dan and Marge (who occasionally still indulges in men). Again the sex makes sense and is all the more interesting because the characters are so vivid and real. Unlike the scenes between Dan and Wendy this part did hold a very real appeal to me. Chapter ten came as a salvation and redemption of sorts, there was an actual physical sense of relief for me as the story made this about- face. Reading this story for review was sort of an exercise in extremes, I kept recoiling from the pedophilia but Dave's writing kept trying engage me, to make me a part of the story - he really is that good a writer. I guess I am going to recommend this story with a warning. If pedophilia is your thing, by all means read the story from beginning to end. If it isn't, read the first chapter then skip down to chapter 10. Here's the warning - if you ignore this advice you *WILL* look back on the story and wonder why you enjoyed reading it, wonder why when you tried to detach yourself you kept being drawn back into the story. A horror story doesn't necessarily have to have blood and monsters in it. Sometimes the terror can be finding out a good author can pull you into a story that assaults what you consider unshakable foundations of your own beliefs of what is right and what is wrong. Athena (technical quality): 10 - a few minor mistakes but easily overlooked. Venus (plot & character): 10-- The story makes sense and the sex is hot. Sandman (appeal to reviewer): 10 - And I'm still asking myself why. |