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"The Bedroom Window" by Sandman (Celestial follow-up)
10, 10, 10
"The Bedroom Window" by Sandman (sandman@bitsmart.com). Sandman's stories are archived at ftp://asstr.ml.org/pub/Authors/sandman/index.html. This is the first author to accept my invitation to post a "Chapter 2" of my "Review" story that first appeared as a review of DG's "Call of Desire." You might more fully enjoy this and the following story if you first read my original story, which is archived at The present story assumes that there was a pair of voyeurs outside my window while I was writing the review and while my husband was coming on to me - or cumming onto me. While they watch us, they make whoopee themselves. At one point we have my husband fucking me in the ass while I am talking to Rose on the phone and the voyeur husband is fucking his wife doggie style outside the window. Then they decide to go home and give me a phone call. I am not certain how this story would do as a stand-alone, but I certainly did enjoy it in the context of my previous story. This author seems to know me too well. I think from now on I'll slant my blinds up instead of down when I close them at night. Ratings for "The Bedroom Window" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |