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"Through the Fence" by Mr. Maquido (voyeurism) 9, 9, 9
"Through the Fence" by Mr. Maquido (maquido@hotmail.com). This is the pilot story in a series entitled "Neighbors," which is a about two couples who live in a small community in Texas. In this episode Alan has arrived home early from a business trip. He plans to shower quickly and hurry off to his health club, where he will lust after the lewd and lascivious Barbara who wears a skintight body suit that makes him cum in the showers after his workout. But before Alan leaves the house he is distracted by his neighbor, Alice, who has never even seen a porn movie but is now sunbathing and having naughty fantasies. His wife comes home and catches Alan in his voyeurism; but instead of being upset, she just joins him. I suppose we'll meet Alice's husband Tom in a future episode. This story had some rough edges, but it offers promise of an interesting series. Ratings for "Through the Fence" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 9 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9 |