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"A Lover's Tail" by Emerson Laken-Palmer (teen incest) 9, 7, 6
"A Lover's Tail" by Emerson Laken-Palmer (Sxjames@aol.com). Guest review by Dart. Amber and Brian are two very horny teenagers that live with their mother, and the "family servant," Jenny. Jenny, bless her heart, recognizes how horny the two teenagers are and generously provides each of them with sexual satisfaction before introducing them to each other in a fashion not generally thought appropriate for siblings. Amber and Brian, of course, love their introduction. I found the characters in this story too thinly developed, and the plot, at least through the beginning of the story, too hurried. In particular, I feel that the character development didn't support the story's surprise ending. Ratings for "A Lover's Tail" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 7 Dart (appeal to reviewer): 6 |