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* "Road Trip" by Michael K. Smith (romance) 10, 10, 10
* "Road Trip" by Michael K. Smith (mksmith@metronet.com). Paul is an eighteen-year-old who is ferrying a car from Texas to Florida. He picks up a hitchhiker named Paula, a girl about the same age who has just left home and is drifting and looking for temporary jobs while she seeks her fortune as a singer. Have you ever wondered where the guys in these stories get their uncanny, precise estimates of girls' breast sizes? Well, Paul reads the tag that says 34B on the bra she left in the bathroom. Paul behaves like a perfect gentleman, even when he wakes up at 4:30 a.m. the first night with blond hair (from her head) tickling his nose. To put it in terms familiar to American presidents: he may have had lust in his heart, but he sniffed and didn't inhale. When she thanks him for not trying anything, he tells her that it was hard; and she cuddles up with him, making it harder. Which reminds me of one of the first dirty jokes I actually tried to tell when I was much younger. I had heard it from some older kids. "How does Jackie find Onasis in the dark?" "I don't know." "It's not difficult!" " was old and his cock was limp; and "difficult" isn't always a good synonym for "hard." Anyway, they break the ice on the second evening. Mouths and hands only; but it is still the best shower of his life to that point - and the story is not over yet. Nuff said. Read the story yourself. It's another good one. Ratings for "Road Trip" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |