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* "The Off Season" by Cobalt Jade (risky sex) 10, 8, 8 http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=237987135 * "The Off Season" by Cobalt Jade (cobaltjade@aol.com). http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=237987135 The guy and woman sneak into a closed amusement park, turn on the carousel, and re-enact a fantasy from their earlier life together. I like the idea of amusement park sex and enjoyed this story, but it was not as hot as I expected it to be. Ratings for "The Off Season" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 8 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 8