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"The Fan Man" By Sundance (voyeurism). Miss Behavin: 10, 9, 8
"The Fan Man" by Sundance (sundance69@hotmail.com) Guest Review by Miss Behavin (missbehavin@sprint.ca) Craig is just your average guy. He's got a wife, kids, a house and a widowed woman neighbor with a 17-year-old daughter, Karen, who's quite a flirt. All Craig really wants to do is get a little R&R on his vacation; but like the good guy that he is, he offers to help her out setting up some new ceiling fans. The characterization is excellent and the set-up is very believable, as Craig finds that a little more than ceiling fans await him at the house next door. Suddenly he finds himself in the attic looking down through a vent into Karen's room. Karen isn't supposed to be at home but there she is, talking on the phone and there he is, trapped because she isn't exactly just "talking" on it to her boyfriend. Craig becomes an unintentional voyeur and the story gets hot. Craig's reactions and thoughts are true and humorous. As things progress, Karen's boyfriend drops by on her request and she decides to give him his birthday present. Something he's been wanted for quite some time, but she's never given him before. Craig watches as Karen experiences giving her first blowjob and almost lets the birthday boy cum. The whole scene spills out before you leaving you panting and frustrated at the same time. The Fan Man held my attention through the whole story, as it's very well written with great imagery that leaves you wiggling in your seat. Overall it's a very good voyeurism story, but I have a couple of quips with it. Besides the fact that it's basically a 'guy story', Karen is experienced beyond her years in her confidence level: and the story leaves you, male or female, hanging in the end -- mildly unfulfilled. Ratings for "The Fan Man" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 9 Miss Behavin` (Appeal): 8 |