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"Her Damned Office Party" by Sean Devon (wife watching) 10, 10, 10
"Her Damned Office Party" by Sean Devon (sean9696@aol.com). This is the kind of story to which I usually give very low ratings. A guy catches his wife being fucked by another man, and he gets horny while he watches. The experience deepens their marital love for each other. Yeah, right…. The reason I hate this kind of story is that the plots are so simplistic and the characters so shallow. They leave me with either a "Yeah, right!" or "What a weirdo!" reaction. This one is different. It's a poem that tells a story. Sort of like "Paradise Lost," only intelligible and not interminable. The poetic format gives the author the freedom to leave things unsaid and to still make sense. I found this story to be quite arousing, largely because the emotions expressed in it made sense to me. Ratings for "Her Damned Office Party" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |