There's no end to useful advice when you want to make a better story, and some readers are an endless source of great suggestions, poorly delivered. This is my compilation of the best advice I could find on the subject, and I hope it'll both delight and enlighten.
2. Learn the rules
A lot of good writing centers around a set of carefully laid out rules which, if followed correctly, will ensure success and many women at your service. Let me honor this by making first sure that formulaic storytelling is good and thoroughly fucked up the ass, possibly multiple times, until it curls up in a ball and rolls over to go back to sleep, maybe even with some cum still oozing out of its gaping anus. With that picture in mind, we can proceed.
3. Write from the heart
Or, better yet, write from the pussy. Your story is meant to excite, arouse, make people squirm, drool and frantically frigg themselves. So why not start with yourself? If what you write doesn't force you to rub your clit as you type and doesn't require you to finish yourself off towards the end, it probably won't have the same effect on your readers either. So better write with a pen-shaped dildo, dipped in twat juice than a limp dick with empty balls. Trust your pussy, she knows these things.
3. Every story has a beginning, a middle part, and an end
But you don't necessarily need to write about all those. In fact, why not send Beginning and End off to eat each other out while you jump straight into bed with the middle part and have it fuck your brains out? It's fine to just stop when you cum, or to go on if you want to cum some more. Or to stop just short of cumming, if you're a little kinky and want to suspend your readers pleasure until they beg for you to finish. Slowly. With a whip.
6. Be coherent
Or not. It's okay when people change, so if your 19 year old sister turns into your 17 year old neighbour's daughter during the intercourse, that's really fine. Puberty is a confusing time, and strange things happen there, so don't sweat it. Instead, have fun! What if the lady giving a blowjob has turned into a gay transvestite munching a sweet swollen clit? Does it get you off? Then let's do it!
11. Listen to your readers
You'll inevitably get unrequested advice from barely literate people, so why not honour them by including their characters into a little follow-up story in the comments too? Tell them how delighted you are about their insightful and well thought out ideas about a story they had no part in writing and which wasn't specifically meant for them to begin with and create a little scene where they repeatedly get raped by an army of drunken rusty robots with spiky appendages that play Miley Cyrus singing the Barney Song on repeat. Imagine the satisfaction it'll bring to them and give yourself another handjob, you wonderful human being, you.
6. By all means, learn how to spell
If it gets you off. There's lit teachers among your readers too, who get an orgasm just from the correct use of their, they're and there. Imagine the dorky lady with the oversized glasses and the grey sweater at your school library creaming her pants over your mastery of the english language and sniff her chair after hours to make sure she left some residue cum there, which is always an indication of how hard she came. Or, you know, if you're in a hurry because someone sucks you off while your riting and u just dont have tiem to be wth fancy words, just get tehm out as fast as yuo can to give the homei on the corner a quickie. He wont mind and will than u later, and so should you,
7. Appreciate your fans
The most dedicated of which are the ones who will send you IMs, wanting to "chat" or for you to "send sum nudes" to them, because apparently your skill at slinging words is so impressive that they've come to appreciate you as a person. In return, you could show your own appreciation with an approximately 12 year long moment of silence. Alternatively, you could have fun playing with them a little, though that would be only for your own entertainment and not for the public good, and thus incredibly selfish. However, if you're the dedicated anthologist, you could just gather the feedback you get for your great work of "a collected edition of the best anonymous feedback from the dregs of the internet's troll armpits, vol. I - XVII"
5. Above all, be yourself
Ah, I'm just kidding. Be a whore. Try every trick in the book to get into the top scores, because only that will ensure more success, more sex and ultimately, more trolls! Imagine the orgasms you could have with an average of 95% or more? Your many slaves will chant the magic percentage of your highest-scoring submission while you shower them in your godlike translucent pee like manna from heaven, elevating yourself to spheres of orgasmic bliss only the angels are meant to know. Seriously, I've heard both Hugh Hefner and Pamela Anderson started out as a high-percentage story writer, thus discovering the magic of endless sex and tantric orgasm. Follow their advice! Buy the book!
I'd like to conclude this essay with thanks to all the trolls who sent me unsolicited advice over the years, the readers who came while reading, the writers who made me come and Apple Inc. for this fine keyboard that's absolutely washable and never ever had liquid seep through, leading to a fried laptop. Never.
Be yourself, have fun. If it's no fun, just don't do it.